Fic: Surprise Package

[ideserveyou]

Title: Surprise Package
Pairing: Howard/Vince
Summary: Howard is having a rubbish birthday. Then it gets better.
Rating: R (dicks doth touch but doth not penetrate in the nether regions)
Warnings: poorly written with too much dialogue
Length: about 3100 words
Spoilers:  See Rating
Disclaimer: These are not my characters. I know them so well, but

Comments

[stripemyovary]

Oh, what a great birthday gift, both in your story and the story itself! That was VERY hot, without missing any sweetness. May I just say, Howard mouthing Vince through his pants is SUUUCH a stellar choice, that always really just does it for me! And their dialogue! It's pitch perfect, right down to the little affectations in Vince's speech. Glad I woke up to this! <3

[ideserveyou]

Thank you, you're very kind. Glad you enjoyed the little pants scene, I could see it very clearly in my head!

nice

[onooyes]

This is great, thank you for posting it!

Re: nice

[ideserveyou]

And thank you for reading and letting me know you enjoyed it!

[worriedeye]

O you are so good. I've read this a fair few times now - it's wonderfully pitched between the 'trademark tenderness' and full on funtimes. I really like... "What do you mean? I’ve waited nearly a whole year. An’ ten years or more before that. I don’t think that’s fast at all. In fact I think that’s slower than slow." And the fourth wall bit - brilliant. Thank you for giving us this lovely - much appreciated. x

[ideserveyou]

You are very kind. I'm glad it hit the spot for you. I was really just eavesdropping on their conversation...