Fic: Not A Pretty Story, 5/?

[ideserveyou]

Title: Not A Pretty Story, 5/?
Summary: Vince and Howard have some important decisions to make
Rating: NC-17 overall, this chapter R maybe?
Warnings: overall the story contains accusations of bestiality, non-consensual sex, anatomically canon!Naboo, blood, violence and a more than usually convoluted plot. This chapter is fairly harmless by

Comments

[pikabun91]

things are looking up! yay <3

[ideserveyou]

Thank you for sticking with it. I hope things will get better from here onwards. Still a fearsomely large number of loose ends to tie up though!

[worriedeye]

Thanks for posting the links - I've just enjoyed rereading all the chapters. Although I'm a massive angster I'm also a big fan of the 'fill the gaps' fics, and this is great. Really, I've enjoyed it loads so far. First chapter I was left wondering what on earth was going on - but that's the beauty of a good cliffhanger, you left me wanting more. And the little details like the sofa, and Howard hiding in a bush. They're brilliant little moments. Thanks lovely.x

[ideserveyou]

Thank you for the kind words. I have often wondered why the zoo closed and what happened in between that and the boys fetching up at the Nabootique and Naboo being on the Board of Shamen. Not sure this will answer all the questions but it might at least fill some of the gaping hole!

[littleredchucks]

Naw! This chapter was lovely. Can't wait for more!

[ideserveyou]

Thank you. There will be more but it's currently all in disjointed bits and I haven't worked out whose POV to use for the next chapter. I think the domestic sitting-on-the-sofa setting is my favourite of all the possible ways to write the four of them, so there will definitely be some of that at some stage, once they've figured out how to get the sofa up the stairs...

[littleredchucks]

I think that's always the first question I ask myself when I start a chapter: whose POV am I going with in this? You write it in your good time, I shall wait patiently, and make popcorn.
And I love the sitting-on-the-sofa set up, and drinking tea, and just being domestic. You could steal from the Halloween story and have a flying sofa. When in doubt, Naboo's magic saves the day. :-)