Hi! Don't know if anybody frequents this community anymore but I just wanted to share the first chapter of my first ever Fremione fic with anyone who is lurking around. I'd appreciate any comments or questions
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I really enjoyed this chapter! Very interesting premise, nicely written. I like the way you let us see that this is a completely different world with just a few little touches here and there, there's just enough backstory to have it make sense without drowning out the story. I'm really interested to see where you go from here!
Thanks for your kind words, I am really glad you like it so far. I have a couple more chapters written, but my other fic Semper Vigilans has kind of taken control of my muse so I'm concentrating more on it at the moment. I will go ahead and post the other two chapters tomorrow though.
I have it posted here and on Ao3. It is a Fred/Hermione/George muggle AU with supernatural elements. If you decide to read it please don't let the first chapter fool you. Though it has a horror vibe to it it will not be that way all the time, the second chapter, which is already up, should prove that. ^_^
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I really enjoyed this chapter! Very interesting premise, nicely written. I like the way you let us see that this is a completely different world with just a few little touches here and there, there's just enough backstory to have it make sense without drowning out the story. I'm really interested to see where you go from here!
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