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Jul 18, 2010 14:56

Title: Bleeding Truth 6/?
Rating: Pg-13/R - for violence.
Warnings/Spoilers: Violence and swearing. Set in season 1.
Summary: Merlin is outed as a sorcerer and Arthur reacts violently. The Prince then tries to move on with his life but Merlin appears everywhere he turns.

Part 1 Part 2 Part 3 Part 4 Part 5

“Oh, it’s you,” Merlin said flatly. “Again.” )

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kittie8571 July 18 2010, 13:25:53 UTC
nooooo!!! you can't leave it THERE!!!

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bookowl July 19 2010, 11:02:47 UTC
Aah, but I can! :D No srsly, it seemed to a good place to leave it if I wanted to get a post out before August :(
Thanks for commenting! There will be more.

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mizzy2k July 18 2010, 14:04:18 UTC
DITTO WHAT KITTIE SAID.

You write plot so compellingly! You must get better soon and continue. <3

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bookowl July 19 2010, 11:07:39 UTC
Thankyou very much! It's really great to know you're enjoying it. *smiles* I am dosed on panadol so hopefully there should be more soonish.

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gateslacker July 18 2010, 14:21:41 UTC
Arrgggghhh. Cliffhanger!!! This is a wonderful story and I am such an impatient reader. Poor Arthur! Poor Merlin! What has that blasted Nimueh done to him?

More soon please :D

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bookowl July 19 2010, 11:12:03 UTC
Thanks heaps, its really good to know you like it! Evil Nimueh is evil. :D Cheers for the comment!

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dayari July 18 2010, 14:59:37 UTC
I second the general ARGH CLIFFHANGER sentiments that have been expressed already--God, I was literally edging forward in my seat during this entire chapter, watching worriedly as it seemed to draw to a close and then actually shouting "NO!" at my poor, innocenet computer screen when it was over. Oh, Merlin. D: D: I have no idea for whom my heart broke more during this (and by the way, I have no idea how I've managed to miss this fic until now, but I'm so glad I found it now!!)... I've never seen quite this take on the whole Arthur-finds-out theme, and I like how slowly you've described his development until now. It's true, Arthur did spend most of his life listening to his father tell him how evil magic is; he's not going to do a complete turnabout just because of Merlin, as sad as that is. But with a few nudges, he'll come around right, I think. :P Now, if he just succeeds in drawing Merlin out of whatever hellish world of illusions Nimueh trapped him in... *bites fingernails* I really hope you continue writing soon, you had me ( ... )

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bookowl July 19 2010, 11:26:10 UTC
Wow, this is an amazing comment, thankyou! I don't know what to say. I knew the cliffhanger was evil when I did it but the chapter had tottered its way over the 2,000 word mark and there wouldn't be another good time to stop it for another 2,ooo at least.

Its good to know its a new take on the magic reveal, since there are a lot of them out there. And Arthur is a hard-headed chap, as we have seen in season 2! Sometimes I want to reach through the screen and strangle him ;)

I'm absolutely thrilled that you are enthralled, thankyou very much for taking the time to comment. You've made me a very happy writer *beams*

PS: And cheers for the cuppa! I'm a pansy really but caffeine cures all ills.

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sweetp000433 July 18 2010, 15:16:18 UTC
Meany!

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bookowl July 19 2010, 11:27:53 UTC
*chuckles evilly*

Spike ftw!

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