A Game of Poker, Chapter 29: Grudge Match

Dec 05, 2009 23:38

Title: A Game of Poker
Author: Bookkbaby
Rating: Teen
Warnings: YAOI
Summary: LUCKY Pair. It started as a simple game of poker, but a little white lie from Lavi changes everything. ['If you lose... you spend the night here, with me, and let me do whatever I want with you.']

Chapter 29: Grudge Match )

lucky, yaoi, tyki, lavi, poker

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filiaxnocis December 6 2009, 06:35:09 UTC
Yayyy! A new update~
Tyki saved Lavi-that made me wiggle(which is a good thing!)
Jasdevi is gonna get beat DOWN~ That also, for some reason, makes me laugh.
Can't wait for the next update!
<3Kiki

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bookkbaby December 20 2009, 06:35:33 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you like it! ^_^ The next chapter will be posted later tonight.

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harmony283 December 6 2009, 09:26:15 UTC
this was actually quite interesting for me XD (The fact that you focused on more than just Tyki and Lavi's side of the fight)

Particularly liked Lenalee's part for some reason~ especially the beginning. *can't wait to see how that turns out*

But yeah--also liked the Lavi-Tyki part obviously, very nice way for them to meet up again, eh? Eh? XD

so yeah *not really coherent seeing as it's 3:30AM in the morning* I'll just shut up now~

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bookkbaby December 20 2009, 06:36:23 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you like that I'm showing more than just the fights with Tyki or Lavi in them. ^_^

The next chapter will be posted later tonight.

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jokerlove December 6 2009, 21:07:10 UTC
Yayz! A new update! I like how you skipped around to other ppls point of view, but I just can't stand the suspense! Its driving me crazy! I have to know if they get back together or not!!! AH! can't wait for the next update, but I guess I'll have to. lol

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bookkbaby December 20 2009, 06:36:51 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you like it. ^_^ I'm happy you liked that other fights were shown!

The next chapter will be posted later tonight.

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darklumi December 7 2009, 17:53:48 UTC
awesome awesome awesome!! :) Tyki saving lavi made me want to squeal!! hopefully theyll make up soon...i dont think their hearts will last much longer! haha :p

will be waiting patiently for the update!!! XD

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bookkbaby December 20 2009, 06:37:09 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked Tyki saving Lavi. ^_^ The next chapter will be posted later tonight.

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_yaoifan_ December 12 2009, 07:37:18 UTC
moooore, please~!

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bookkbaby December 20 2009, 06:37:26 UTC
*laughs* I'm glad you like the fic so far. The next chapter will be posted later tonight.

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_yaoifan_ December 20 2009, 08:40:41 UTC
Wheee~! *check out for other chapter* whooo, there's chapter!

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