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A Game of Poker, Chapter 21: The Fine Line

Jul 06, 2009 23:51

Title: A Game of Poker
Author: Bookkbaby
Rating: Teen
Warnings: YAOI
Summary: LUCKY Pair, Yullen. It started as a simple game of poker, but a little white lie from Lavi changes everything. ['If you lose... you spend the night here, with me, and let me do whatever I want with you.']

( Chapter 21: The Fine Line )

lucky, yaoi, tyki, lavi, poker

Comments 22

filiaxnocis July 7 2009, 05:34:33 UTC

Lovely chapter~!
Kanda needs to embrace his feelings and stop denying that he loves Allen. Life would be so much better for him then. :)
Can't wait for the next update!
<3Kiki

bookkbaby July 21 2009, 23:00:34 UTC

Thank you! And yes, Kanda does need to stop denying... ^_^ But he's so cute when he's stubborn! ^_^

The next chapter will be posted later today or early tomorrow.

amikko July 7 2009, 08:35:24 UTC

ooh..is that a hint of yullen there? :D

bookkbaby July 21 2009, 23:01:00 UTC

Yes, but just a hint for now. ^_^ I'm glad you liked it!

The next chapter will be posted later today or early tomorrow.

puutarhalapio July 7 2009, 10:32:02 UTC

OH GOD THERE'S YULLEN TOO!? 8DDDDDD *more fangirling*

I love youuuuuu~ <3. And I love this fic!

bookkbaby July 21 2009, 23:01:40 UTC

Thanks! Fangirling is fun - I do it myself quite a bit... XD

And yes, yay for Yullen!

The next chapter will be posted later today or early tomorrow.

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bookkbaby July 21 2009, 23:02:11 UTC

I have fangirl moments too. They're fun!

I'm glad you like the story and the Yullen! The next chapter will be posted later today or early tomorrow.

chika10 July 7 2009, 15:23:27 UTC

hihi you "Lucky" awesome play on words xD
once again it was a great chapter. I actually think that there were hints of Yullen scattered across the whole plot. But the fact that they were rather subtle makes it cuter ^^. Plus Lavi is really in total turmoil. The way you've got him keeping all these things in is evil I wouldnt be surprised if he just explodes some time soon ;)
I look forward to the next chapter and thank you for taking the time to write this

bookkbaby July 21 2009, 23:03:26 UTC

Thanks! ^_^

There were hints of Yullen, but I wasn't entirely sure I'd include them as a real pairing and not just background until now. (They apparently had other plans all along and had planned on hijacking the story for a while...) ^_^

The next chapter will be posted later today or early tomorrow.