LJ Idol - Friends & Rivals - Week 2: Follow Me

[bookishgeek]

"The woods are lovely, dark and deep. But I have promises to keep, and miles to go before I sleep." - Robert Frost

The fingers of trees scraped the top of his car, and an involuntary shiver flung itself up and down his spine - crescendo, decrescendo. From the backseat of his worn-out '94 Saturn, Tennyson began to growl faintly. Matthias cursed

Comments

[banyangirl1832]

Oh. My. God.

So delightfully creepy and literary! The motifs! The slow build of suspense! When I got to the part about the whites of the man's eyes, I got actual shivers. Well done.

[bookishgeek]

I may or may not have been picturing The Undertaker ...

Not going to lie though I gave myself chill bumps writing the ending and had to "nope" out of there.

[kathrynrose]

Creeeeeeeepyyyyyyyyyyy! :)

[ragnarok_08]

Whoa...this was so creepy and very atmospheric - well done!!

[awakenyourfaith]

Whoa. This story was too eerie, and too cool.

[alycewilson]

Creepy! Well written.