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iteari December 22 2010, 15:13:30 UTC
I think she was going for all-out awkward but surprisingly, the author actually didn't try to romanticize it or anything. It plays a plot point in pissing off the evil lord because he was hoping his heir to be flawless.

Mostly, it's just there for Taryn to sigh about and to fasten the pacing of the story when she is feeling episodic vertigo from her condition so you have to anticipate what's to happen next. It didn't work too much mostly because you couldn't care what was going to happen next. It is indeed a dull novel.

The problem is that Taryn's only characterized by her condition, her griping about her flaws (familiar, isn't it?), and her twue wuv with Erick.

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iteari December 22 2010, 16:07:19 UTC
Agreed!

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nyxalinth December 22 2010, 16:16:32 UTC
we need a tag for 'How did this get publiched when it sucks so badly?'

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nyxalinth December 22 2010, 16:17:33 UTC
Oops, typo. Word should have been 'Published'. I have typing fail.

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iteari December 22 2010, 17:58:09 UTC
Don't worry, it happens to all of us. :)

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