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[bookelfe]

All I have to say is that when I get stuck on the subway without a book, I can't hold myself accountable for what happens. Written in an hour, largely (as aforementioned) on the subway.

Title: Dirty Dancing
Fandom: Gokusen
Characters: Yankumi, Shin, Ucchi, Shiori, Kuma, Noda, Minami
Rating: Despite the icon, cool for kids
Summary: A CAREFREE

Comments

[futuresoon]

OH MAN WHEN I SAW YOUR ICON I SUDDENLY HAD THE FAINT HOPE THAT YOU HAD WRITTEN FIC AND THEN I SAW THAT YOU HAD AND THEN THERE WERE HEARTS IN MY EYES BEFORE I EVEN STARTED READING IT AND NOW THERE ARE ALL THE HEARTS THAT CAN FIT. ♥♥♥ If you were to get stuck on the subway without a book again, I would not complain, I am just saying.

(Extra extra love for "I want them to have lots of babies," says Ucchi dreamily, "and then I want all their babies to dance at my babies' weddings just like this." OH UCCHI. Surely you know that their offspring will be super-intimidating yakuza heirs who will terrify everyone else? Probably they will be super-dorky super-intimidating yakuza heirs, though, so maybe things won't be so bad.)

[bookelfe]

WELL GIVEN THAT YOU ARE ALREADY WRITING ME FIC IT ONLY SEEMS FAIR I GUESS. I am glad you like it! :DDD

(Hahaha, I suspect Ucchi tends to forget about the super-intimidating yakuza heirs part. However I feel it is INEVITABLE that they will be super-dorky super-intimidating yakuza heirs, so. And terrible at dancing.)

[futuresoon]

I CAN ONLY HOPE THAT MY FIC WILL BE AS ADORABLE AS YOURS. (Currently I am trying to nail down that dreaded Plot thing. IT SHALL BE MINE.)

(It would be kind of hilarious if one of Yankumi and Shin's inevitable offspring hooked up with one of the other boys' theoretical offspring. KEEP IT IN THE FAMILY, YO.)

[bookelfe]

I HAVE NO DOUBT. (I cunningly avoid this Plot thing as often as possible, hahaha. But I HAVE CONFIDENCE IN YOU.)

(LOLOL. Man, I can't decide if Yankumi would get hugely shiny-eyed over the continuation of the ~bonds of friendship~, or feel the need to repeatedly threaten the other theoretical offspring and its parent with beatdowns if they ever made her own offspring cry, OR BOTH.)

[valkyriesailor]

Shin not knowing how to dance... that's surprising! I really enjoyed reading this. Hope for more. :D

[bookelfe]

Heh - I figure a kid who is apparently completely uninterested in non-Yankumi dates would never have had much of a chance to pick up that skill, however cool he may look. Thanks - I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

[ojuzu]

So I saw this on my flist and thought 'omg, this has to be the best thing ever'. Then I read it, and lo and behold IT WAS THE BEST THING EVER. ♥ & hearts; ♥ ♥

I love that Shin continues to be a total dork for Yankumi, and I agree wholeheartedly with Ucchi! Their kids would be dorky badass yakuza kids and it would be AMAZING. Shin's dad would be all disapproving of the marriage but babysit the kids for free and take them to his work and tell them why police are awesome and no good will ever come of breaking the law. And then Shin would visit him and be like Dad, stop telling the kids weird stuff about my job.

So, uh, basically WRITE MOAR PLZ.

[bookelfe]

Shin will never stop being a dork for Yankumi, no matter how old he gets. I am sorry, it is just a fact. Their children are doomed to inherit it, Shin's dad will JUST HAVE TO DEAL with the dork gene that has invaded his bloodline. *giggling*

THANK YOU I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT.

[ojuzu]

really liked ur idea...........wish someone write about this (possibly u)..........

[lacewood]

AHAHAHAHA. Saving Ucchi and his girlfriend from Yankumi's intervention! Kuma being the first dude brave enough to consider dancing with her! And the dancing. *dying*

Maybe you should get stuck on the subway without a book more often - okay, I'm kidding but...

[bookelfe]

Kuma is always the one who is least embarrassed by being nice to Yankumi! It's 'cause he loves his mom. *solemn* I AM GLAD YOU LIKED IT.

nooooooo I need my books *clings* THERE ARE OTHER WAYS TO MAKE ME WRITE FIC

[lacewood]

It's so true, Kuma really is the biggest sweetheart of the gang. XD

I was kidding! Mostly! *coughhack*

[bookelfe]

Hee, thank you! Glad you liked it. :D