Comments | bookaddict43: What the Captain doesn't know won't hurt him : prompt # 16

bookaddict43

What the Captain doesn't know won't hurt him : prompt # 16

Aug 13, 2006 23:21

Title: What the Captain doesn’t know won’t hurt him
Prompt # 16 Turn
Author: Bookaddict
Characters: Jayne/Kaylee, crew, OCs
Rating: PG13
Word count: 1194
Comments : Comments: a collaboration between squish_67 and myself. Prompt table and previous chapters here. Thanks to bookishtype for the banner. Mouseover Chinese translations.

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bookaddict43 August 15 2006, 02:35:10 UTC

Yeah I'm a bit sorry for our pair - hope they work out their feelings.

I hope they can avoid the bad guys too! But who knows where squish_67 might take it...

jayneswoman August 13 2006, 14:08:48 UTC

Real, shiny, bookaddict42!

I love how you and squish_67 are writing Jayne and Kaylee both so unsure and thinking they aren't good enough for the other. Hope fully this will be temporary, and sometime later they will realise they're perfect for each other....

And Rich and his gang are closing in on the couple. Tension mounts.

Over to you squish_67!

bookaddict43 August 15 2006, 02:36:37 UTC

yay for a bit of tension! I hope Janye & Kaylee can avoid the bad guys and yes I hope they're inadequate feelings don't last for long!

maureen August 13 2006, 16:50:54 UTC

Mal sneezing while talking cracked me the hell up.

Good post. You guys and these ruttin' cliffhangers, though. It's like watching batman when I was little and I had to keep coming back next week.

bookaddict43 August 15 2006, 02:38:41 UTC

I remember those Batman episodes...and I always missed the continuations!! *mourns*

I usually don't intend to write cliffhangers, they just end up that way - truly.

Glad you're hanging in there...there's quite a bit more to come.

artemis_prime August 13 2006, 17:56:13 UTC

Why must I be tortured in this way? I get all excited to see a new chapter up and then you dangle me over the cliffhanger. Gorram it! Why have you written such great stuff that I get so involved in it? Why?

bookaddict43 August 15 2006, 02:40:18 UTC

Thanks for the compliment, I'm glad that we managed to involve you!! Sorry for the pain though :) Stay tuned for the next exciting episode....

anxiety_junkie August 13 2006, 19:06:20 UTC

Ooh, a new chapter! *does a happy dance*

And I agree completely with artemis_prime, it's very cruel to make up wait so long and then make us wait some more! *g*

bookaddict43 August 15 2006, 02:41:43 UTC

Sorry about the wait!! But glad you're enjoying it! *joins the dance*