Necessity

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Title: Necessity
Fandom: Hawaii Five-0
Pairing: Steve/Danny (pre-slash)
Rating: G
Word count: 581
Comments: A late coda to episode 2.14 because I wondered what Steve was thinking about after Joe left and before he ended up at the hospital. 1st person POV

Comments

[vintrackergirl]

Nice! I like that you used Steve's POV for this, so we can hear his thoughts that much more clearly.

[siluria]

I like that you bring up Steve losing some of his trust in Joe, because in my mind I can't see how he'd be able to completely trust him now.

On a shallower note, there should definitely be more fixating on Danny! :)