House Fic: Filling In the Blanks (Or, Ten Easy Ways to Take Control of Your Life)

Dec 04, 2008 18:46

Title: Filling In the Blanks (Or, Ten Easy Ways to Take Control of Your Life)
Fandom: House M.D.
Pairing: House/Cuddy, House/Wilson/Cuddy friendship
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 5,400
Spoilers: Post-ep for "Let Them Eat Cake"
Summary: “We don’t have to go home,” House said, ignoring her last jibe. “We could go anywhere you’d like. Movies, restaurants ( Read more... )

fic, house, house/cuddy

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clasicesperanza December 5 2008, 01:49:08 UTC
I'm not much of a critical reviewer, I either like things or I don't.
This is one of the things I like (: ahaha.

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book_rapport December 5 2008, 04:25:54 UTC
Thank you so much! :)

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perspi December 5 2008, 18:10:42 UTC
I don't have time to finish this now, but I'm mem-ing it for perusal later this weekend. Because I love the beginning, and I want to give you more feedback! EEEE! :)

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book_rapport December 7 2008, 08:27:23 UTC
Thanks so much! I hope you have an amazing weekend :)

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topaz_eyes December 5 2008, 18:53:16 UTC
Oh, YES. I have missed your writing, so much.

You nailed House, Wilson and Cuddy here. The banter is spot on, and the scenarios are hilarious. House steals Cuddy's car! Wilson unintentionally honks his horn! It's light and sweet, and you must have had a lot of fun writing it.

Psst--I did see one nitpick: Any nasauea, headaches, joint pain? Should be "nausea."

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book_rapport December 7 2008, 08:30:31 UTC
oh, my goodness, I love you so, so much :D

I'm thrilled you think the dialogue was IC-- this was my first attempt at writing House fic, so it means so much to me that one of my fav authors enjoyed this!! :)

It's light and sweet, and you must have had a lot of fun writing it.

I really did! Especially after the fun/angst of "Let Them Eat Cake." The ending was sad, but the juvenile pranks and bickering beforehand? Win. :)

And thank you so much for pointing out that error! I can't believe I didn't catch that *facepalm* It's fixed now!! :)

Thanks again for reading, I'm so excited that we now share two fandoms! <3

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phinnia December 5 2008, 19:41:55 UTC
Oh, this is just lovely. I adore the format, and Wilson making an utter dork of himself at the end (not to mention the fact that he engineered the whole thing in the first place): the voices were dead on perfect, the case thread was really well done and quite believable ... this is fantastic. <3

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book_rapport December 7 2008, 08:32:26 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm glad the format worked for you-- I've done a few "Five Ways..." stories, but this was my first House fic so I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

the case thread was really well done and quite believable

That means so much to me! I am not a science person at all, so I was depending on Wikipedia ;)

Thanks again for reading and taking the time to review! :)

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book_rapport December 7 2008, 08:33:30 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm blushing, but it really does feel like an honor that you've read my fic since I've been mooning over yours :)

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