oh man this hits home so so bad. when i thought they're all happy in their place, the apology happened and then you're back to the state you're at when you just heard that jay is not coming back T_T
anyway, this is lovely, i love the parts where jay still constantly monitor the 2pm guys, like he never stopped being a leader. i remembered when they just came out with without you and jay said in his youtube page that khun's rapping is FIRE. oh how i miss ot7 stuff :(
Made me realize how much i miss them as 7 ;___; Everytime i read a couple of lines i was like "awww" And omg , Jay monitoring the guys . Lol i imagine him doing that . But this fic was really good , love the way you write (:
the thing about this fic, is that l can actually see all this happening; it would not surprised me at all if it all did happen. it's that realistic and in character. /pats you on back
also, I really like how this is written, solemn but not really sad or angsty. these two get too much angst. but this is nice because it has them facing the real world, how it is for their lives now, but not being depressed about it.
oh woah, thank you :) sometimes i try not to write 2pm!fics because seriously, i dont think i can grasp the characters and put them into words, i'm really glad you like it :)
i try making it as realistic as i could, because moving on it's part of life, so i try not to linger too much on the angst, i hope it worked ;A;
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when i thought they're all happy in their place, the apology happened and then you're back to the state you're at when you just heard that jay is not coming back T_T
anyway, this is lovely, i love the parts where jay still constantly monitor the 2pm guys, like he never stopped being a leader. i remembered when they just came out with without you and jay said in his youtube page that khun's rapping is FIRE. oh how i miss ot7 stuff :(
and that last line, so beautiful ♥
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thank you, your comment really means a lot :)
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Everytime i read a couple of lines i was like "awww"
And omg , Jay monitoring the guys . Lol i imagine him doing that .
But this fic was really good , love the way you write (:
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thank you for reading and commenting, i'm glad you like it :)
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the thing about this fic, is that l can actually see all this happening; it would not surprised me at all if it all did happen. it's that realistic and in character. /pats you on back
also, I really like how this is written, solemn but not really sad or angsty. these two get too much angst. but this is nice because it has them facing the real world, how it is for their lives now, but not being depressed about it.
l still miss jay tho ;A;
taecjay ftw
<3
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i try making it as realistic as i could, because moving on it's part of life, so i try not to linger too much on the angst, i hope it worked ;A;
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But I bet Jay misses them, and they miss him just as much.
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i think they still viewed each others as brothers, because a bond isn't as easily broken as it seem :)
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your comment really means a lot :)
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