Re: Visions of redboogieshoesSeptember 20 2009, 13:04:04 UTC
thank you! :)
right now, my muse is giving me mostly this kind of short - glimpses into their lives at various points. i'm not sure if the 'how they became werewolves' stories will come about - but i can't say they won't, either. i just don't know.
but you're welcome to write in this AU if you're so inspired. :-)
Very vivid story and great images. It sounds like they have a wonderful "den" and of course Ezra had it built and decorated. Great enemy for them to fight and lovely look at Chris; fire really hasn't ever been a good thing for him. Love how well they are all intergrated into the community. I'm sure Chris' wolf peeking thru is extremely impressive. Thank you so much for this part and I hope to see more of this AU.
i love world-building, and right now, i'm wandering through real estate ads for Denver in the evenings, looking for the ranch house/ den. :-D it's a lot of fun, and i've seen some pretty awesome places, but none that was perfect - yet!
I do like this, and I like their relation to the fire. You kept Chris in excellent voice - the part about his strengths, as opposed to Josiah's and Nathan's, was excellent - and the others, though they didn't speak much on-screen, were all recognizably themselves. Buena, muy buena.
Now: le's see the discover some contraband-smuggling folk having created the fire, and go hunt them suckers down.
*ahem*
Sorry; I got a bit over-wrought concerning that particular spot of news.
right now i'm thinking the fire was a natural thing. but this is an open AU, if you'd like to write in it. :-)
i'm kinda hoping other people *will* write in this - i seem to be getting life through Chris here, but Josiah's and Nathan's pov would be interesting, i think. so would Vin's. i'm not sure what i'll write next in this AU, but there's a strong possibility of it being a Buck, pov, if i can manage it.
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right now, my muse is giving me mostly this kind of short - glimpses into their lives at various points. i'm not sure if the 'how they became werewolves' stories will come about - but i can't say they won't, either. i just don't know.
but you're welcome to write in this AU if you're so inspired. :-)
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One thing though, when Chris is leaning against his Dodge Ram, should "black" be capitalized?
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and a *sheepish look* for the 'black' thing - i gave a quick read-through before i posted, and completely missed that. *facepalm*
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thank you!
i love world-building, and right now, i'm wandering through real estate ads for Denver in the evenings, looking for the ranch house/ den. :-D it's a lot of fun, and i've seen some pretty awesome places, but none that was perfect - yet!
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Now: le's see the discover some contraband-smuggling folk having created the fire, and go hunt them suckers down.
*ahem*
Sorry; I got a bit over-wrought concerning that particular spot of news.
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right now i'm thinking the fire was a natural thing. but this is an open AU, if you'd like to write in it. :-)
i'm kinda hoping other people *will* write in this - i seem to be getting life through Chris here, but Josiah's and Nathan's pov would be interesting, i think. so would Vin's. i'm not sure what i'll write next in this AU, but there's a strong possibility of it being a Buck, pov, if i can manage it.
*hugs again, re chemo*
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