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[pashoshi]

The Pin Drabble Thing

Theme #10: FRIENDS

Jin and Yamapi are best friends! Jin and Yamapi have lots of other friends who can mock them/conspire against them/hook them up/etc! I'm sure there are other things that could be done with this theme, but I'll leave that to the rest of you to figure out!

FIC AWAY, PINIONS!

Comments

[wintersjuly]

I think I said something about not doing these things anymore since my drabbles tend to suck a lot. So, see my self-restraint? It's totally non-existent. I love the way my brain works.

When Jin gets back, the only one who doesn't smile is Yamapi.

When Jin gets back, the only one who knows how much he missed the freedom of America is Yamapi.

When Jin gets back, the only one who asks about him and not what he did in America is Yamapi.

And when Jin swallows difficultly, and says in a soft voice that he didn't want to come back, that he wasn't just him there, but someone other him and that he's not sorry he didn't miss Japan, Yamapi closes a hand around his wrist, warm, steady and reassuring

[araanaz9]

This... this is pretty much how I felt when I came back after living abroad for a year. It brings back memories, feelings, this old wound that doesn't seem to heal.

[snowqueenofhoth]

This drabble and your comment make me worried.

Moving HOME. It's more of an abstract concept at the moment. What will that be like? I don't miss home, not really. I miss PEOPLE, sometimes, but... will it be weird? Will it be awful?

*gnaws at her lip*

[araanaz9]

Don't worry. *pats* It's different for everyone. We can talk about it if you want. Just poke me on AIM.

[anonymous]

[anonymous]

Re: part 2

[mananeh]

Hello, stranger! Hmm... Kame the catalyst - more importantly, Kame the catalyst for PIN!SEX (I'm still debating which part I preferred - Jin's 'if' scenario, or the actual scene).

"So," Yamapi prompts. He is smiling gently. "Got what you needed?"

Jin looks at Yamapi, at the headlights from the street sinking low on Yamapi's naked body, and then he understands.

It's a little sad, but probably a good thing in the long run. I can see how Jin and Yamapi might be better as just friends (while at the same time Yamapi doesn't back away from indulging Jin's... I couldn't even call it curiousity. Mutual want-to-rip-each-other's-clothes-off, maybe?). It's not rejection. It's not bad. It's not a door closing. It's just a realisation that, in my mind anyway, I can't see as being bad for their friendship - it's just...defining an edge that was a little fuzzy before?

After that ramble, feel free to point and mock if I've read this wrong and I'm being dense XD (and I liked it a lot &hearts)

Re: part 2

[imwahyou]

Wha... I don't know what to say to this. Mouth is just kinda hanging open. I don't know what to think of this either. Not that it's a bad thing. I'm just... confused. Not about the plot, but how I feel. Sorry, my words are a bit jumbled and redundant.

Random thoughts now. It feels like Akame ninja-ed its way in, but not really. Your style seems really developed.

This line: Jin looks at Yamapi, at the headlights from the street sinking low on Yamapi's naked body, and then he understands.
It makes me feel a little empty.

And... it just occured to me that I think this is the first truely angsty Pin fic I have ever read. Thank you for writing~ ♥

Pt. 1 apparently.

[tinyangl]

~_~;; Why do I come up with weird drabbles. But whatever. I wrote this in the middle of French class (when I probably should've been paying attention) and well... It fit the theme, coincidentally enough. So, decided to comment here. Oh, and excuse the first/second point of view thing. I've been doing that lately. And I have NO idea if it even works.

You, more than anyone, know how much I dislike loneliness. It's something you work hard to remedy and I have always appreciated every effort, whether little ro big. That's why I encouraged you in what you wanted, despite the fact that my heart was screaming "Don't leave" everytime we talked. It almost slips out during those conversation, but I manage to ever say the words.

But when you call me in tears, only a week and a half after you've left, I get that screaming urge again to tell you to just give up and come back to Japan, where you belong. "With me" usually follows, but those words are more in a whisper in my mind, as though I'm afraid that's not enough reason. Instead, I whisper

Now Pt. 2. I can't believe I had to split it.

[tinyangl]

I deny this, telling you that you're imagining things.

You whisper to me, "I missed you too," a second later and it hurts to breath now.

"I miss you." I whisper back and I can feel him smiling at the other end.

"I'll definitely be back," you say, your voice determined and the words "to you" are said without even having to be verbal.

I don't want to have you hear me break down so I joke instead about how I hope when you come back, your english will have improved at least. You laugh at me and complain that it wasn't your fault that you were gullible enough. I laugh again and then decide that now would probably be an appropriate time to leave. I start to say good-bye, and you tell me that you'll let me go, so "you're free to break down sobbing, 'kay, Pi?"

I snort, but don't say a word to deny it and when a minute passes of just us breathing, I know you're smiling on the other line. "Bye, Pi," you say and I say my farewells as well. We hang up and I stare at the phone for a few minutes, wondering if all our conversations would be

[anamuan]

enjoyed!

[mananeh]

Aw. I really liked this. Kind of bittersweet - it's not exactly right between them straight away, but they'll get there.

Re: Knowing Silence

[anamuan]

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