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galwithglasses November 18 2011, 01:33:43 UTC
I enjoyed this. The voice-over of the narrator was fun. "Where's the babysitter?" Hee!

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bonspiel November 21 2011, 03:15:46 UTC
Thanks so much!

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softcake_70 December 28 2011, 15:05:56 UTC
This was so much fun :)

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bonspiel January 12 2012, 22:00:15 UTC
Thank you so much!

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j_robbinson September 18 2012, 07:38:49 UTC
So here I was innocently trying to find some non-slash supernatural fiction and actually having a hard time finding it, for a moment, and then I stumbled upon your story! I must say I never saw the movie so I'm not sure how much of that awesome plot was your making and how much was the movie-writer's, but

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j_robbinson September 18 2012, 07:45:24 UTC
Hahaha, God I'm such a noob. I was switching into my account while writing that reply and naturally I send it unfinished. Let's forget about that. BUT, i really enjoyed it! Loved the narrator pieces, very cool to see how that works in stories instead of movies. And I loved how Jared (not) handled everything with his siblings. Real cool piece of writhing!

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bonspiel October 17 2012, 01:41:28 UTC
Thanks very much - sorry for not seeing this comment for so long. So glad you enjoyed reading it :)

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