Pause, Listen, and Count; Booth/Hodgins, PG-13

Jul 05, 2007 18:06

Title: Pause, Listen, and Count
Author: Lostakasha
Pairing: Booth/Hodgins
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1,459
Disclaimer: Not mine, but if they were, they'd do this.
Beta by copperwash
Feedback is needed like oxygen. Thanks!

Summary: This is a present for carmen_sandiego. I stole an unclaimed prompt: licorice, the desert, the body electric (from carlyinrome as it so happens) and wrote ( Read more... )

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plazmah July 5 2007, 22:38:32 UTC
Oh... my god. *dies a thousand wonderful deaths* I'm not even a fan of Hodgins/Booth and this is quite possibly one of the most beautiful Bones fics I've read. Poetry makes everything better. I can't wait for your finished fic! :D

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lostakasha July 6 2007, 00:06:37 UTC
What wonderful feedback -- thank you so much! And yes, I think poetry makes everything better, too. :)

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lostakasha July 6 2007, 00:33:41 UTC
Good Ol' Walt Whitman. Can't beat him with a stick.

Glad you liked this. I had a ball writing it.

copperwash and I were just howling over your 'Booth not being good enough for Hodgins' observation. That's funny. ♥

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spikendru July 6 2007, 00:34:23 UTC
Guh! Just . . . Guh! OMG! This is your interim fic? I'm not sure if I'll be able to read your assigned fic, 'cause this one keeled me ded! This is truly beautiful; your words even more so than Whitman's. “You file the interphalangeal joints smooth. All shooters do.” OMG! Of course Hodgins would notice that! And then, Just like that - so simple - and Hodgins was holding an assassin’s hand. *dies* He's so utterly accepting of Booth, and Booth needs that!

*loves*

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lostakasha July 6 2007, 00:49:24 UTC
*jumps for joy*

They are so bizarrely perfect for one another, aren't they? And thank you for the wonderful feedback, sweets... I'm glad the fun I had writing this came through.

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4ensicbones July 6 2007, 01:41:06 UTC
/dies/

And the poem makes it even better, as if that were even possible.

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lostakasha July 6 2007, 01:50:36 UTC
Thank you so much.... I'm glad it moved you!

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lostakasha July 6 2007, 11:19:40 UTC
*grabs you*

I'm so happy you dug this....can you tell I just loooovvve first kiss fics?

*smooches you*

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