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withoutchange January 5 2012, 02:14:09 UTC
"this is how we college students live. Not for each other," and he laughs. "Not for each other, but with."

this is bittersweet, a harsh reality, and beautifully written. amazing job <3

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bollywoodrecord January 5 2012, 22:09:41 UTC
♥ Thank you for reading :)

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jesusluvsjaeho January 5 2012, 04:08:05 UTC
i would read yunho/cl if more people wrote them. i love the pairing. and i don't have a rational explanation for it. lol.

this is really long considering you had only 1 week. o.o i bow to your writing awesomeness.

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bollywoodrecord January 5 2012, 22:11:40 UTC
I got the pairing request and was like 0_o but then I started getting into it, and the whole story just flowed out. I wish I could write everything like this lol. Thank you for reading, dear! <3

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bisteu January 5 2012, 05:48:48 UTC
this is really bittersweet and just amazing. chaerin in this is refreshingly vulnerable, yet strong in this fic and I would definitely like to see more yunho/cl because I love crackships like that

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bollywoodrecord January 5 2012, 22:16:54 UTC
I wasn't sure if I had gotten down Chaerin's character right because I usually only see her as really fierce and strong, so I'm really happy that you liked the characterization. Thank you for reading! <3

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curcol January 5 2012, 11:17:19 UTC
I was lazy at first, it's too long... but boy, I was hooked!!
great one!

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bollywoodrecord January 5 2012, 22:24:51 UTC
lol sorry for the length. But I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading :)

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paperchasin January 6 2012, 00:01:08 UTC
i love and encourage strange pairings. :D i like how you took two common pairings and broke them up to bring two people together who people wouldn't normally ship together.

i had a feeling the entire fic that jiyong liked chaerin more than she actually liked him. and that yunho was only with boa out of convenience. i love how you conveyed their emotions through their actions more than with words. :)

gah, i want to write an entire essay comment but my laptop is literally about to die. i loved it! :D

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paperchasin January 6 2012, 20:54:40 UTC
rereading this fic cause i have time now. :D

i take back the comment about jiyong liking chaerin more than she liked him. i think they liked each other well enough, but yunho just liked her more. i reread the scene where they were both at a party and how although she's there with jiyong, yunho is paying more attention to her than he is.

i also think that jiyong is secretly wishing she'd actually say something about him kissing other girls, but she doesn't have enough conviction in their relationship to actually do something about it. she was too far gone from her original self that she began accepting less than what she deserved.

... i don't even know if i'm making any sense now.

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bollywoodrecord January 7 2012, 00:20:55 UTC
SPOT ON. THANK YOU T-T Actually, out of this whole fic, I like GD/CL the best. I also ship Yunho/BoA, and I'm so happy that you caught on to turning those two into a new pairing. Also, in this fic, I tried to make Chaerin like Jiyoung more in their relationship, but towards the end, when she started to really get hang of the friends-with-benefits concept, Jiyoung began to truly like her.

Also, totally was thinking this: i also think that jiyong is secretly wishing she'd actually say something about him kissing other girls

You read my mind :D Haha, I love your comment, and that you pretty much pointed out everything not explicitly pointed out in the fic. Thank you, for all those things ♥

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