Title: Puppet on Strings
Fandoms: 2NE1, Big Bang, BoA, DBSK
Pairing(s): Yunho/CL, G-Dragon/CL, Yunho/BoA
Genre: AU, Angst, Friendship, Romance
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Chaerin learns the way of college life a little too harshly.
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Chaerin begins to wonder if this life is really cut out for her, but Jiyoung always manages to whisk her away at the right moments, kissing her lightly before leading her out of the house, and she always changes her mind. )
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this is bittersweet, a harsh reality, and beautifully written. amazing job <3
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this is really long considering you had only 1 week. o.o i bow to your writing awesomeness.
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great one!
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i had a feeling the entire fic that jiyong liked chaerin more than she actually liked him. and that yunho was only with boa out of convenience. i love how you conveyed their emotions through their actions more than with words. :)
gah, i want to write an entire essay comment but my laptop is literally about to die. i loved it! :D
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i take back the comment about jiyong liking chaerin more than she liked him. i think they liked each other well enough, but yunho just liked her more. i reread the scene where they were both at a party and how although she's there with jiyong, yunho is paying more attention to her than he is.
i also think that jiyong is secretly wishing she'd actually say something about him kissing other girls, but she doesn't have enough conviction in their relationship to actually do something about it. she was too far gone from her original self that she began accepting less than what she deserved.
... i don't even know if i'm making any sense now.
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Also, totally was thinking this: i also think that jiyong is secretly wishing she'd actually say something about him kissing other girls
You read my mind :D Haha, I love your comment, and that you pretty much pointed out everything not explicitly pointed out in the fic. Thank you, for all those things ♥
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