Comments | bollywoodrecord: Smile for Me

bollywoodrecord

Smile for Me

Sep 18, 2011 10:10

Title: Smile for Me
Fandoms: CN Blue, SNSD, Super Junior
Pairing(s): Donghae/Jessica, Yonghwa/Seohyun
Genre: Angst, Romance
Rating: PG
Summary: Jessica relives her past in Seohyun’s present.

( Seohyun just came home from the first shooting, and her eyes are welled up with tears. )

rating: pg, fandom: snsd, genre: angst, fandom: cn.blue, genre: romance, pairing: yonghwa/seohyun, pairing: donghae/jessica, fandom: super junior

Comments 31

kjtodd08 September 18 2011, 17:49:26 UTC

I've never imagine Jessica being sickly in love but now...I think I can,haha. Thanks to this story;)) She really has a strong personality so I thought guys would flock out just for her! And there's something serious and just real about her...or maybe its just me>.< Anyway the Yongseo moments are truly precious. It's just out of all the couples - I saw theirs to be slow and yet so real, like they are slowly going through all the steps to make sure they don't miss anything and that's how I thought liking someone should be.

Your writing style is really amazing! I wish I can write like you:((
Thanks for this!!!^^~

bollywoodrecord September 19 2011, 14:51:05 UTC

I imagine Jessica to be really vulnerable, but she doesn't ever show it. My portrayal of her is far from the best, but this is just how I see her to be :) YongSeo did, I agree, go slower than everyone else, which is probably why their relationship built the most. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!

Goodness!!!! eevanlvis September 18 2011, 18:24:55 UTC

Amazing! It was written beautifully. I'm new to k-pop but I've read quite a few horrible things that people wrote about SNSD girls; especially Jessica. And after reading this, it feels like you have written what actually might have happened. Jessica being denied of dating and her emotions after that was well written.
Along with jealousy I somewhere felt Jessica being protective of Seohyun so that she doesn't end up disappointed like her, idk.
Great work though.
I hope I can write like this. :)

Re: Goodness!!!! bollywoodrecord September 19 2011, 14:52:32 UTC

Jessica does seem a lot more protective of Seohyun then the other girls, so I can see there being a reason behind it. Your comment is so sweet; thank you for reading, dear!

oreocookeys September 18 2011, 18:42:09 UTC

SEQUELLLL

i love how each of the characters is portrayed. this was absolutely beautiful.

fate_otaku September 18 2011, 22:17:30 UTC

Seconding the sequel notion!

bollywoodrecord September 19 2011, 14:53:19 UTC

Hahaha, I'll have to see what I can do :) Thank you so much for reading! <3

fate_otaku September 18 2011, 22:18:37 UTC

Amazing. AGAIN! :D

And I hope you're feeling a little bit better now, bb. :)

bollywoodrecord September 19 2011, 14:53:58 UTC

Oh, I am. Thank you so much, dear <333

dawnxiamara September 19 2011, 00:02:28 UTC

Ahhh... long time no see on gogumafics. Are you losing hope on YS that's why you are absent for a long time? Don't be, this is their charm we gogumas always wonder about little things they show on screen & also BTS that we stop & think if they are truly in a relationship off cam or what. I don't really know but, i tell you it makes us to be on the edge of our seats just wanting to know more about them trying to decode everything they do, the subtle ways, the stares & everything. It's like we are in a roller coaster ride scary but exciting & after the ride wanting for more. That's how i feel. How about you?

bollywoodrecord September 19 2011, 14:55:28 UTC

I'm not losing hope on them, my ship just hasn't been all that big. I'm rewatching their WGM, though, so they are growing back. I feel like they'll always be very close friends, if they aren't going to be more, so it's nice to see them interact :)