Title: And I’m leaving out the courtesy (of admitting I was wrong)

[boldpapermate]

Title: And I’m leaving out the courtesy (of admitting I was wrong)
Author: Boldpapermate
Pairing: Callie/Arizona
Length: 4,934
Rating: PG-13
Spoilers: Everything through 7x16 (unfortunately).
Summary: Arizona’s reaction to her initial reaction. I suck at summaries, so just read it and you won’t be disappointed. Promise. This is the sequel to You’ve

Comments

[funkyshaz57]

WOW that was pretty full on! Your writing is pretty darn amazing the whole thing overall was flawless and so honest and raw....And don't kill me but outright depressing lol - Well for me anyway It actually made me sad and made me think is this how Arizona feels on the show?? Because I wouldn't be surprised if it is - And if it is then it's sad like really sad that inside she is in a way breaking...Everything was so raw and honest and I felt just this heartbreak for Arizona imagining she was or is going through this on the show

[boldpapermate]

Hey man, I LOVE long reviews. It makes me feel like I'm actually doing something right. I love it when people comment with actual comments! :) Well, I was hoping for all those things except forthe depressing part, haha. I really tried to get it a little past that b/c lately I've been uber sad but I guess it seeped in

[saoirsegirl]

You write such emotionally powerful stories.

"Punishment for Arizona's mistakes. " - completely agree with this.

[boldpapermate]

Aww, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[almicah]

you wrote this incredibly nice and I'm mad for Arizona having to put up with that shit. On the show Callie wants Mark to be involved BUT wtf the baby isn't even born yet.

[boldpapermate]

Thank you! And I completely agree with that statement, haha.

[istillam]

I just wanted to say how proud I am of you with this story!!!! Your changes to the ending really just impresses me to no end, much more solid and it feels genuine, like there's been a resolution without one really being found. Me gusta!!! You wrote this beautifully, and it fits so well along with what we've been seeing on our screens, filling in all the blanks the writers didn't seem to deem necessary. You are awesome!!!! :)

[boldpapermate]

THANK YOU!!! That means so much, haha. I felt like it was needed so I'm glad you agree. Your words make my heart all warm & fuzzy :). You're the awesome one!!!

[the_lionn]

Wow! Incredible, this was incredible raw and honest and I must say, Arizona is not the only one feeling this way. Just reading make me angry! LOL. You can really feel the emotions with every word in Arizona´s head. It´s hearbreaking. And just watching what it´s ahead in the last sneaks....I really wanted that Arizona walked away after that comment from Mark. It´s like, after all that she´s been sacrificing, he had the nerve to question her feelings.

I realiced just a couple of days that apparently all is forgotten and shiny just for a heartbeat, don´t get me wrong, I almost understand how a baby can make you blind, but as a viewer, I can´t get over the fact that Callie once again slept with Mark. And you explained the "why" perfectly with this:

"Arizona would have told Callie that she was hurt because Callie had felt physically ready to cheat on her-and okay, maybe they weren’t together at the time, but in Arizona’s head it still counted-when Arizona hadn’t even felt emotionally ready to look at another woman"At the moment, this

[boldpapermate]

Just a little bitter, haha. I understand it though & I thank you for the comments! Ithink them to be wonderful & while I do think that Arizona & Callie are MFEO, I don't like the way the story is being played out. Thanks for reading!