Luau Drabble for Queen hitlikehammers

Aug 12, 2009 09:44

Title: Paper Planes Fly, Too
Rating: PG
Character: Ana Lucia
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: season two
Summary: No, 42F isn’t the answer to life.
A/N: For lostsquee Luau Queen hitlikehammers, who requested airplanes and happened to mention the Tailies.

No, 42F isn’t the answer to life. )

drabble, fic, lost

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siluria August 14 2009, 20:27:20 UTC
Nicely done!!! The irony of those last two lines is fantastic :)

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bold_seer August 15 2009, 06:28:06 UTC
Thank you very much! Lost and irony just seem to go together. :)

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hitlikehammers August 25 2009, 20:23:03 UTC
Wow. Just... wow. The portrait you paint here is extraordinary - I was never really attached to Ana Lucia at first, but as more was revealed about her, I gradually got to like her at least a bit, until she popped up in S5 and I realized how much I kind of missed her. Long story short, I'm really, really glad you wrote this about her, because it's such a perfect portrayal of who I'd like to think she was, given what we know of her, and you do it so well, with so few words and so much emotion, and just... guh. I'm rambling, and I apologize for that, but really, this is lovely. The tone, the words, the structure, everything. Wonderful - thank you so much.

(And I also apologize for being sooooo late in commenting - I was without internet where I went, and I had to wait until I got home to read and review)

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bold_seer August 25 2009, 20:46:49 UTC
Thank you so much! You know, I feel exactly the same way about Ana. She was hardly on my favourite list at first, but by her season five appearance, I had grown to like her. I hope we see more of her.

Oh, and no worries! I was away without internet for about a week, too, so can’t really complain. :)

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dance_the_dance January 30 2010, 17:23:24 UTC
Ana Lucia! I'm so late to find this fic (for some reason I always am... I follow most communities only in theory :P), but there are so few Ana fics that I feel the need to comment. :) It was gorgeous and - I agree - very in character. ♥

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bold_seer January 30 2010, 20:32:58 UTC
Thanks for the unexpected, er, thanks! :D

I'm a bit like you; I always stumble upon old fic.

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missy_useless April 18 2010, 17:11:13 UTC
This is so freaking perfect, so powerful and raw and heartbreaking and so very, very Ana.

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bold_seer April 18 2010, 18:37:13 UTC
I love that you love Ana. Thanks!

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