Comments | bold_seer: Lost 108: Measured by the Hours

bold_seer

Lost 108: Measured by the Hours

Oct 25, 2009 23:00

Title: Measured by the Hours
Rating: PG
Pairing: Sawyer/Juliet
Word Count: 108
Spoilers/Warnings: 5x16
Summary: It begins with a half-empty bottle and a beach.
A/N: For lost_in_108 #05 - liquor.

( It begins with a half-empty bottle and a beach. )

drabble, fic, lost

Comments 15

ozmissage October 25 2009, 23:35:59 UTC

OMG...I love this. Absolutely love it. Just guh. You captured their entire relationship in 108 words and it's brilliant and that last line made me all sniffly. Thank you so much for writing this!

bold_seer October 26 2009, 10:23:48 UTC

Oh, thank you; I'm glad you liked it! :)

phelipa October 26 2009, 02:39:25 UTC

Awww, I love this. The idea of the white flash just being the beginning if very comforting *fingers crossed*. Great job - it's amazing how much longer than 108 words these seem!

bold_seer October 26 2009, 10:28:59 UTC

Thank you! I think it's just the fact that we're used to 100 word drabbles; the extra eight words make these seem long - even longer than 108 words.

valhalla37 October 26 2009, 14:26:20 UTC

Ack, this is incredible -- so haunting and pitch-perfect and such a great interpretation of the Juliet/Sawyer relationship.

bold_seer October 26 2009, 22:44:41 UTC

Thank you so much; I'm glad you think that!

missy_useless October 27 2009, 21:06:09 UTC

I am not a fan of the pairing and I tend to stay away from J/S fic, but this was just too beautifully written to ignore. Wonderful work, your writing style is amazing.

bold_seer October 28 2009, 08:57:30 UTC

Oh, thank you so much! I'm happy you got something out of it, even though the pairing wasn't your cup of tea.

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bold_seer October 28 2009, 08:58:58 UTC

THANKS! :)