Comments | bokura_no_uta: [ONESHOT] Breathe.

yakiseop in bokura_no_uta

[ONESHOT] Breathe.

Jan 05, 2011 21:14

Title: Breathe.
Group: U-Kiss.
Pairing: Elixander. As always.
Rating: NC17.
Warning: Bad English, dubcon, sort of choking fetish. Not Julia-safe.
Summary: Something seemed off with Alexander that day.
N/A: I don't know why I wrote this, and I'll never know. Fic solemnly dedicated to furutsu.

( “I may have something stored for you.” )

oneshot, p: alexander lee/elison kim, really short and really stupid, group: u-kiss, rating: nc-17

Comments 28

brandnewwind January 6 2011, 00:37:00 UTC

Oh, so it is dedicated to Mia. Oh. I see. I see.

Well.
FUCK EVERYTHING. I LOVE THIS SO BAD /noms

This is me, not caring. At all. This is the only dubcon that I actually love and is actually dubcon and saldklkajs choking was never this hot. Plus, notreal!Alexander is mine, so mine.

AND
“I give you a minute,” Alexander sneaked an arm around Eli’s waist and pressed their bodies together forcefully, making Eli gasp in surprise when he felt it. “To guess it.”
AND ALSO
“Time is ticking…” he teased, caressing Eli’s hair rather violently, making the younger one feel a sting of pain on his nape.
AND EVERYTHING ELSE.
Just. Geez. Perfect, so perfect. /noms more

I like Mia!you as much as I like you!you, k? :')
♥♥♥

I STILL FEEL KINDA WRONG FOR FINDING THIS SO BEAUTIFUL THOUGH D:

brandnewwind January 6 2011, 00:39:20 UTC

OH AND
I don't know why I wrote this, and I'll never know.
JDHFGBSGBDHFKDJFKHJSBFADHJS I do. Admit it, you do too lol
IT'S ALL HIS FAULT, NOTHING TO BE ASHAMED OF, BB )':

yakiseop January 6 2011, 01:14:44 UTC

WELL, WE HAD THIS TALK. Glad to know you love this so much, because I don't! OUIHERFIUHEROUIFHERUIFUIERFHEI oh well. Just a thing, don't you find your love for aggressive!Alexander kind of... freaky? Just askin'.

Yah, this thing of using Mia as an adjective is fun, isn't it? OIUHERFUIHEURIOFRE sankyuu. Sankyuu for all the support. ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

YOU FEEL LIKE ELI??
AND YEAH. IT'S ALL HIS FAULT. ))))))):> I IS SAD DESU.

xsharetheworld January 6 2011, 00:42:26 UTC

SHPOTTING.

xsharetheworld January 7 2011, 04:17:49 UTC

LMAO Oh Eli~

yakiseop January 8 2011, 15:24:28 UTC

YOUR ICON. Lol'ing forever.
Thank you for reading and commenting, dear! ♥

yakiseop January 6 2011, 01:16:10 UTC

Spot for Mia! :'D Mah bb ♥♥

furutsu January 6 2011, 15:50:57 UTC

I hope you are aware of what happened to my PC last night and why I haven't been able to comment until now. Starting again:

Let me ask you one thing.
HOW HAVE I BECOME A SYNONYM FOR EVERYTHING SCARY AND TENSE AND HOLYSHITS? NO, SERIOUSLY.
(don't need to answer that.)

ANYWAY! I likes it ♥♥♥ It's sex and it's dreaming. I'm glad my kouhais are following my instructions correctly and becoming Mini Mias. AND THANKS FOR DEDICATING IT TO MEEEEEEH~

( ... )

brandnewwind January 7 2011, 04:35:39 UTC

Ew.

elasticbanana January 7 2011, 23:53:45 UTC

LOL that was the first image that came to my mind as I read that sentence X'DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

Thread 5

s2_otter January 6 2011, 08:36:44 UTC

OMG. SO HOT.
I really thought there was just a dark side to Xander >____>!
It was reallyyyyyyyy cool to see Xander like that :P
Poor Eli, he didn't finish the dream :(
Kevin lolllll, you're totally trying to escape XD
Gah, Eli needs to really show Alexander though :P!

yakiseop January 8 2011, 16:07:13 UTC

!! Thank you!! \*3*/
Oh, there is, most probably. It's just that Eli didn't get to see it yet. This remembers of that Kibum-was-knocked-on-the-head fic and gives me ideas for sequels.... AAAAAGH
I thought it'd freak the readers out, but I realize you all like aggressive!Alexander as much as I do XD
Eli does need to show Alexander his incredible ability XD Thank you for reading and commenting, darling! Hopefully I'll see you again soon! ♥♥♥

s2_otter January 9 2011, 03:32:55 UTC

!!!
I WANT SEQUEL. I WANT SEQUEL.
YES. AGRESSIVE ALEXANDER IS APPROPRIATE. 3As :D Straight A students huh, /wiggles eyebrows
Haha, you mean, you'll post another story and you'll see my comment soon? Oh definitely. If, you post XD!

samanitajayne January 6 2011, 09:39:20 UTC

KYAAAAAA!! Elixander Smut! <3
Is it HAWT in here or is it just me? :P

ME LIKES EVIL (well not really evil) ALEXANDER!I don't know why but Alexander + aggressive behaviour just totally turns me on! It's this weird fetish I have ah my gosh. Too bad it turned out to be one of Eli's many erotic dreams about Xander that ends right at the good part D: D: I totally feel his pain cause I've had dreams that were so nice but I wake up abruptly at the best moment. -______________-

Love that you've been updating frequently! Yay!
How's your chapter ed fic coming?

yakiseop January 8 2011, 16:31:40 UTC

Yes! :'D /hides face
It is hot here, but it's because it's summer XD

OMG I FEEL YOU! When I was writing this, I was like "goodness, what is my problem, WHY DO I LIKE AGGRESSIVE!ALEXANDER SO MUCH?" and such. Good to know I'm not the only one! XD Ah, yeah, Eli seriously need to get these dreams of his checked out, just sayin'.
Ah, me too! It's so frustrating X____X dreams are often better than reality...

Just a sudden gust of creativity XD
Ah, I'm kinda behind on my multichaps, because I've written too many oneshots. ç__ç'
Well, thank you for reading and commenting, bb ♥♥♥