twinkle in the desert sky

[penny_ln]

to me you are a shining star
lighting the sky with your radiant beauty
scoping you through my telescope
gazing at this thing i shall never touch but always know

Comments

[ultbandreject]

Simply lovely. Blunt and loving. (by the way, Cursive- Sierra, is my all time favorite song.)

[penny_ln]

thank you
most of my stuff is blunt
i cant write poems poetically lol

i've only just got turned on to them
but i'm so in love with their music!

[meg_and]

Loved it as well! Its a great appreciation of the simple beauties in life.

[penny_ln]

thank you
i always tell people that i think everyone seriously underappreciates the beauty of simplicity

thanks again :o)

[ireland_aria]

Gorgeous and simple...my fave ^_^ I love reading new and fresh wording that describes some of the most common sensations.

[penny_ln]

MUCHAS GRACIAS :o)