Arashi - [Fanfiction] Immortal Arashi - Ch 11

[boe_4eva]

Title: Immortal Arashi
Rating: NC17
Pairings: Ohmiya Sakuraiba (Don't think Jun isn't involved though. Coz he is, and he's SEXY)
Chapters: 11 of 17 
Word Count: 25,516 
Summary: In a world of Elf's, Demons, Nymphs and Vampires. Only the strong can survive, unless an alliance can be mended. Will a company of five reunite a torn world in chaos?

I wanna

Comments

[kos_mos26]

Yay plot development! I sense...a storm on the horrizon....hohoho...

“You’re so hot when you’re a nerd…” A voice purred from over his shoulder, and Sho could feel Aiba’s cool breath against his neck.

I was really hoping for them to get it on in the library...but I suspose plot is more important. I like Sho's plan...and can't wait for the battle!

Thanks for the update

[boe_4eva]

YAY for plot! I know right!
Im excited for peoples to read the next few chappies! Theyre some of my favourites ne ^^

Bwah, oh yush hot and heavy in the libary.... that woulda been nice... but YESH plot is important!

Happy you like it ne ^^
<3<3 Thankyou for commenting once again!! <3<3

[kos_mos26]

Now that I reread my comment...it sounds totally like I'm demanding Sakuraiba smex.

Sorry, I know how hard it can be to write smut without making it fell...forced. (whoa, what a sentence...XD) In my own series, SAAC, I've been pushing off getting them together to the point where both myself and my readers are getting sexually frustrated, (not to mention my Aiba and Sho hehe) Argh...enough about me.

It's just when I read the line that I quoted above...I was like YESS!! FINALLY!!...and then nothing but very, very important plot happened, where I was expecting...very,very hot action.

You know what? This your fic is awesome enough as it is. Don't listen me, and keep on keeping on...XD

[boe_4eva]

HAHA! No worries, honestly, im not very good at writting smutty-shmex stuff. And theres going to be too much happening tooo quickly, and i dont want to ruin the seriousness of the situation. They're gunna GO IN TO BATTLE BWAHAHAHAHAHA

Mind you... if anyone could think about sex before battle... it would be Aiba... -_-''

<3

[boe_4eva]

Umm the battle chapters i think are quite long, i can't remember. -_-'' sorry...
I honestly woulda liked to put in some action, but it's sooo hard with Sho and his character... he needed to concentrate ne hehe
Thankyou for commenting again! <3

[rezq_23]

I like the strategy... And can't wait for the battle to start... ^^

[boe_4eva]

Im happy you like, it will begin soon!
Thankyou for commenting <3<3

[devanat]

i love you! and the rest of the comment i just told you..so i wont repeat! ^_^...but//but..i will repeat this:

“You’re so hot when you’re a nerd…” A voice purred from over his shoulder, and Sho could feel Aiba’s cool breath against his neck.

THANK YOU!! ^___^

[boe_4eva]

Im so very happy you liked it honey bunch hehe

<3<3<3

[kattrin_kun]

oh yay! i can't wait, warriors are so hot. this chapter was such a teaser with the sakuraiba! oh well. yay for the update though!

[boe_4eva]

Warriors are so full of awesome!
hehe Im happy you liked it, sorry to tease you ne... BWAH
Thankyou for commenting <3