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mia_dcwut_09 June 4 2009, 23:20:47 UTC
o wow looks like someone put their foot in it

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bobthesungod June 6 2009, 21:39:56 UTC
LOL, I know, right? And at first it wasn't the intention I was going but it just fit I think.

Thanks for reading!!!

And the next part is up in case you're curious.

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mia_dcwut_09 June 6 2009, 22:04:50 UTC
k ill check it out

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swingandswirl June 5 2009, 01:58:21 UTC
*is torn between wanting to hug Colby and smack him upside the head* Although I can't really blame him... Even if he did hurt poor Charlie. *hugs him instead*

Great work, and I can't wait for the next bit!

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bobthesungod June 6 2009, 21:40:25 UTC
-big grins- Thank you for reading!!

And wait no more, the next part is up! : )

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ladygray99 June 5 2009, 02:39:50 UTC
dundundun. Next bit please?

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bobthesungod June 6 2009, 21:40:49 UTC
Thanks for reading! :D

Next bit, you got it. It's up. :)

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lillyg June 5 2009, 09:48:16 UTC
Next! :p

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bobthesungod June 6 2009, 21:41:05 UTC
You got it! It's up! :D

Thanks for reading!

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clwilson2006 June 5 2009, 11:32:13 UTC
oh. hurt the one you love, done that many time's. love the way you describe Charlie's eyes.

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bobthesungod June 6 2009, 21:42:26 UTC
That's exacttlllyyyyyy what I was trying to portray, I've done it before too. -shamed-

But Charlie's eyes ARE wonderful, aren't they?

Thank you for such a wonderful compliment on my writing.

And thank you for reading!

Next part is up in case you're curious.

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