IS THIS INSANE OR WHAT?? TWO UPDATES IN TWO DAYS??

[bmw_remixed]

Hehe...

I liked how I said I'd get this up before school started. But then I realized I didn't need the last 700 words I spent two months writing (PAINFUL 700 WORDS) for this chapter at all. So after much much revamping... I now have one slightly shorter Chapter Three and part of Chapter Four

Comments

[grass_angel]

No one has commented? I feel sad, because this part is so full of action and conflict.

I think this would be my favourite chapter so far. There's something about violence done in the name of love that I like and Senbonzakura with her concern about being replaced, her wonderful acting and manipulation... *sighs*
It was very good.

[bmw_remixed]

Aww, thanks! I nearly clawed my brains out trying to keep Senbonzakura in character. Hopefully it worked. ^^;;

[senbonzakura77]

Wow. Beautiful piece so far.. I love how you are personifying Senbonzakura; the perfect mix of arrogant & sarcastic, with a bit of manipulation. Brilliant! :D

And of course she's going to be a little mad about Hisana.. tsk, tsk Byakuya.

Very intriguing story. :D

[bmw_remixed]

(Psh, Byakuya, you didn't think you were getting off that easily, did you?)

Thanks! Glad you liked it. =]

[thesundaywriter]

Love the story. Can't wait to see what happens next!

[bmw_remixed]

Your icon amuses me. And I don't know why. xD

Glad you like it. =]

[laurie_bunter]

Hi. I hope you finish this story, someday. :) Please! Pretty please. It's well written and has nice dramatic tension, which is perfect for my favorite captain.

I also just love the idea of Senbonzakura being such a jealous female zapankutou. :)

[bmw_remixed]

I hope I finish this someday too xD. Your awfully nice comment shamed me for not touching this for such a long time. xP

Thanks for appreciating Senbonzakura's characterization -
I nearly scratched out my eyes trying to get it consistent and not Mary-sued.