Magnetism

[bmw_remixed]

Title: Magnetism
Author: bmw_remixed
Fandom: Bleach
Character(s): Byakuya and Rukia... sorta. Not really.
Warning(s): Standard first-fic-in-fandom warning. =]
Disclaimer: Non habeo.

Comments

[perouze]

sdfghjsdf. I am in love with your characterizations of their swords. They should totally go out.

Man. That was awesome. The descriptions, everything, all that. Sentient sword fics are my favorite ones to read.

But I wonder why Rukia and Byakuya are fighting each other? Hmm.

[bmw_remixed]

Aww.. thanks! Glad you liked it =]

I wish Kubo Tite would show more sword avatars in the manga/anime. Zabimaru and Zangetsu need more companions!

Byakuya tried to take Rukia's Chappy. v__v

[sporkpower]

That was very good; the ending line is pure love.

[bmw_remixed]

Thanks =] (personally, I felt the ending line was a bit melodramatic.)

[sporkpower]

Melodramatic is my middle name. :3

[litlest_amazon]

Definately awesome but sometimes I would have to go back a line or two to figure out who was who. I don't know if there is a way to make that more clear or not but awesome nonetheless.

[bmw_remixed]

Thanks for the constructive criticism, and I'm glad you liked it. (Even though there was a bit of confusion.)

I'll see what I can do ^^

[twistedsheets10]

Awesome! I've always toyed with the idea of Sode no Shirayuki as a Man, rather than a woman.

And senbonsakura is definitely a mean bitch for me. :P

[mystic_fate]

"She attacks for a final time with a flurry of dying flowers, and his winter is turned to spring."

Awww the prettiness. That line... that line, it just ties in everything up so so well. <3