Comments | blythe025: Brigit's Flame: Smashing Pumkins

blythe025

Brigit's Flame: Smashing Pumkins

Jan 16, 2011 12:39

TITLE: haven't thought of one yet
PROMPT: Smashing Pumpkins
WORD COUNT: 1,637
NOTES: This is my week two entry for January's brigits_flame. This is a continuation of last week's story, so you might want to read that first before reading this one. Be prepared for some violence and swearing, if you don't like that sort of thin.

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This wolf was not her father ( Read more... )

fiction, untitled werewolf novel, novel idea, brigits flame, werewolves

Comments 21

ex_naomi_ja January 16 2011, 20:45:20 UTC

I vote for continuing! It feels like there's a lot more story to tell to me.

layer January 16 2011, 21:53:11 UTC

i agree! i want more.

blythe025 January 17 2011, 21:03:38 UTC

Thanks! And I will work on that. :D

blythe025 January 17 2011, 21:03:12 UTC

:D
Thank you! I have to say, it means a lot that you're enjoying my story. It makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside.

There is definitely more story to tell, and as I continue writing it, I'm starting to get a sense of the larger structure, which is a huge relief.

keppiehed January 17 2011, 14:02:48 UTC

It would be interesting to see what you do with the story from here. So far there has been a lot of action, which has worked well, but a turn in the narrative would require some emotional depth. See where the muse takes you, but I think you have something started here that would make for a neat tale. In the meantime, good luck in the pools this week (and nice use working the prompt in)!

blythe025 January 17 2011, 21:44:10 UTC

Thank you. Things will definitely tone down after this. There's a lot of dealing with the repercussions of the event that needs to happen. I'm not entirely sure where the whole of the storyline is going to go, but I'm having fun getting there.

belluminabyssus January 17 2011, 16:21:50 UTC

You definitely have a handle on the young adult fantasy genre -- I feel like a lot of young girls would LOVE to read this story (or ... book, as it seems that it's turning into something much longer). I'm intrigued to see what is going to happen with Claire's secret, and if Jason will turn into a wolf, or what'll happen with the strange wolf. I'm also interested in knowing about more of this world -- what other creatures are there?

blythe025 January 17 2011, 21:42:28 UTC

Thank you. It is indeed turning into something much larger, which is leaving me scratching my head as I work out the details. I'm not entirely sure where it's going to go at this point, but it's fun discovering it as I write. :)

merthin January 21 2011, 00:14:27 UTC

This is nice and bloody. :-)

blythe025 January 21 2011, 22:32:50 UTC

lol. Thank you. :)

rubyelf January 21 2011, 00:40:57 UTC

Hello! Some editing for you ( ... )