The Moral of Her Story (1/1)
Title: The Moral of Her Story
Characters: Rachel, Santana, Puck.
Rating: R
Word Count: ~3500
Genre: Pezberry friendship. Puckleberry romance/angst. AU Future.
Warnings: Language.
Disclaimer: Ryan Murphy & Co./Fox Broadcasting owns Glee. I definitely do not. At all. Nor am I receiving any form of compensation for this.
Prompt: “Your Prince Charming isn’t ( Read more... )
Characters: Rachel, Santana, Puck.
Rating: R
Word Count: ~3500
Genre: Pezberry friendship. Puckleberry romance/angst. AU Future.
Warnings: Language.
Disclaimer: Ryan Murphy & Co./Fox Broadcasting owns Glee. I definitely do not. At all. Nor am I receiving any form of compensation for this.
Prompt: “Your Prince Charming isn’t ( Read more... )
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The original point of the scene is somewhat similar to this, Mila and Justin Timberlake's characters were doing a FWB thing obviously and then stopped to be with other people and the guy Mila was with ended up being a tool, which led her mother to explaining to her what the real problem was with or without the tool in the picture.
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Furst of all, Pezzberry just feels so natural in future fics. It's like they are meant to be best friends later on in life. It just works some how. maybe it is just the Puckleberries that it works for, but, it works.
Second, I love how Rachel is a lot more calm in this fic. I also like how you did put that Finn was less douche-y, but he was still kind of a douche...he really didn't grow out of it...and he still isn't the brightest crayon in the box...he's like that one crayon that no one ever uses...dumbass...anyway, enough with the finnbashing...
I love how you write the interactions between Puck and Rachel. They flow naturally and there is just the right amount of sweet, sometimes spice, sometimes playfulness...its just perefect...
oh, and I love how Santana yells her answer at the end, that was perfect.
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