house of cards

Jan 07, 2008 17:27

house of cards
(569 words) // (tom/mike, tom/william)
for jun 09 07 at
we_are_cities.
quiet, assuming fic for
theworshipper, who asked for tom/mike, and i wrote this.

Tom doesn’t take his camera everywhere. He doesn’t. He just always has it when he needs it, somehow. )

tom/william, fic, mike/tom

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sweetrecovery January 8 2008, 00:18:31 UTC
Oh, god. This was gorgeous.

Tom isn’t taking pictures of Empires like he did before. If it all happens again, he doesn’t want to be able to watch the fall in still images, clutching desperately at something far-gone and rational. That line struck me so hard. Just, wow.

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withoutmaps January 8 2008, 00:25:12 UTC
Wow. This is so gorgeous. I love the past and the present and the texts. I love every single word.

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chibigirl626 January 8 2008, 02:51:58 UTC
Empires. You mentioned Empires. Oh my, it really took that line for it to sink in; how radically different Empires can/will be from TAI, and oh. The pairings just make it all the more beautiful.

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amplifiedstatic January 8 2008, 07:55:30 UTC
...oh my god. i'm. i'm actually just staring at the page in awe. i asked you before how do you even exist on the basis that you are too good to me - but i'll ask it again now because your way with words has absolutely floored me.

do you realize this is probably one of my favorite things in the world, now? (let me be cliché for a moment and tell you how i really want to quote this entire thing back, now.)

...but Mike tangled his trembles in Tom’s hair instead, pulling him down. Tom forgot about everything he’d developed, remembering the dry taste on Mike’s tongue instead - i think that is one of the most beautiful descriptions i've ever read. ever. tangled his trembles in Tom's hair. just, god. that's going to stick with me for a long, long time.

He breathes on them lightly, and Bill’s breath hitches when his fingertips touch Tom’s mouth. - i can't get over this. the gesture is so entirely intimate, yet probably never used in anything i've read before. i think it was starking how much the contrast between this scene and the ( ... )

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wordsalone January 8 2008, 14:13:23 UTC
This was amazingly gorgeous.

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