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Too Fast For Mistakes

Jan 30, 2009 22:06

Title: Too Fast For Mistakes
Author: blurhawaii
Disclaimer: I don't own 24.
Rating: PG-13
Summary: This takes place in season 4 when Mandy takes Tony hostage.
Pairing: Jack/Tony
Words: 4886

AN: It starts just like the episode, but then veers of into my own twisted mind. I hope you enjoy it.
I did start this years ago,and am only now bothering to finish it, so you ( Read more... )

Comments 5

tamanth January 31 2009, 08:51:08 UTC

:3 sdfghjkl poor Jack! I love this. :)

blurhawaii January 31 2009, 09:26:19 UTC

I know, I was tempted to end it happily for him but it didn't really work.
I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment.

acidbeast January 31 2009, 16:11:32 UTC

I'm glad you didn't let it end happily. :D I love the ambivalence. Gotta save it. <3

blurhawaii January 31 2009, 23:01:42 UTC

Ending it happily would have required a lot more writing to get it to work, and this had already been in progress for a couple of years, so i'm happy with this. I'm glad other people are as well. Thanks for the comment

angeliena February 3 2009, 08:01:06 UTC

I hope you will write more!!! I love it! Jack hase to tell somebody how he feel about Tony!