The Company We Keep, Chapter 27

Sep 28, 2010 14:08



Title:  The Unfailingly Noble
Author:  BlueWhit
Characters:  Sylar/Claire
Category:  Romance
Word Count:  4, 008
Rating:  PG-13 (this fic, though not necessarily this chapter, contains language, mild violence, and consensual sexuality)
Disclaimer:  Nope, don't own it. 
Warnings:  Contains occasional references to events or dialogue in any given season ( Read more... )

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kikamontanez September 28 2010, 18:43:57 UTC
Oh my gosh! I just started reading this on ff.net before work! Will finish what you have soon! It's so wonderful!

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bluewhit September 28 2010, 19:00:36 UTC
Thanks so much, kikamontanez! Hope you enjoy the rest of it! :)

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kikamontanez September 30 2010, 03:57:39 UTC
Okay, so I hate it that I haven't reviewed every single chapter, but I read this on my lunchbreak so it's been very difficult just to get around to reviewing at all.
I am literally hooked. The characters are so true to the series, and you never write boring parts that I have to scroll through. What I really, really, really love is that you can write in 3rd person and still magically jump from Sylar's POV to Claire's at any given time.
I love this fic to pieces, and I will review every chapter when I get a chance, but in the meantime, PLEASE continue!

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bluewhit September 30 2010, 17:33:08 UTC
I'm sure you're far too nice. But thank you so much, because it still makes me all happy and warm and whatnot. :D

"you never write boring parts that I have to scroll through" That's good to hear, because as much as I hate to admit to being so very ADHD, I know exactly what you're talking about, lol. I feel like I've ripped so many talented fic authors off by scrolling through their painstakingly written "boring parts." *Sigh* I'm awful.

Your comment about the POV is especially welcome, because sometimes I'm a little worried about how that comes off, whether it's smooth enough or not.

Thank you all around, kikamontanez, and of course you don't have to worry about reviewing every single chapter. I know what a hassle that can be when you read a rather large piece straight through. It's nice enough of you to read and let me know you're enjoying it. That's more than a lot of people do, lol. :)

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kikamontanez September 30 2010, 04:09:17 UTC
By the way, these two vids might as well have been made for this fic:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=08ihd_O8Sw4

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pr-tuhex5ng

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bluewhit October 3 2010, 04:26:49 UTC
I haven't watched the other one yet (my connection could be much, much faster in my current location, lol), but I think the "Love the Way You Lie" one actually made me like the song. :D

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jezbub799 October 27 2010, 00:53:28 UTC
I am not a Sylar/Claire shipper or fan, but I started to read the fic on fanfiction.net and my goodness if you did not make a believer out of me.

I LOVE this story, adore it SO much. :)

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bluewhit October 27 2010, 01:00:57 UTC
Thank you, jez! For some reason it always makes me smile a bit wider when I receive a nice review from someone who doesn't ship Sylaire. :)

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jezbub799 October 27 2010, 02:49:35 UTC
You are welcomed! I can understand a bit. I like Sylar/Elle, so when I read a story, I feel like automatically I should like it, even if maybe it is not well written etc..but when it is something that someone is not completely in to, but you can write something that draws them in, it is really cool.

Your story just seems more realistic to me when it comes to those 2. I like the dialogue, the sass...it is just an enjoyable read.

I am working on 2 Sylar fics, one is Sylar/OC and has a lot of Claire and other Heroes characters in it etc... and I enjoy writing for Claire as well!

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devon380black November 13 2010, 08:30:08 UTC
I like the part where sylar is so eager to make claire stay...Hehehe

Please update soon...

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