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Stars. ; Ruki x Kai ( Chapter 3 / ? )

Aug 25, 2009 22:49

Title : Stars.
Chapters : Chapter 3 / ?
Author : bluevioletapple
Genre : High school AU , Drama
Warnings : Nothing much right now.
Rating : PG
Pairings / Characters : Ruki x Kai ( ? ) , the GazettE
Synopsis : Reita had known Kai for about 3 years already.
Comments : *shoots self *
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bluevioletapple August 27 2009, 05:59:06 UTC

LOL. I just noticed the mistakes. XD I typed this up real quick late at night so yeah ~ Errors galore !

I'll change them , maybe if I'm not too lazy ~ It's a lazy lazy day ..

And I was wondering about how you were doing too ! :D
I'm having as much of a difficult time writing. MY BRAIN JUST REFUSES TO CO-OPERATE ! D:

Oh , bb , I love your stories than I do with my own. I miss ya too ~ *glomptacklehugs* <333333333333

zuzuma August 25 2009, 19:48:38 UTC

Haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay~ The end part reminds me of Kai and some interview he had. He said that he didn't like to see his mother sad and if he did he's be like ".....Oh shit."
ANYWAYS. THIS WAS REALLY CUTE.

Kai wasted no time in walking over and plopping his head on Reita's lap , startling him from his thoughts. The younger man moved his arm to cover his eyes , sighing deeply as he made himself comfortable.
" I'm so tired , Reita. "
Reita could only run his fingers through Kai's hair in response. " I know , Kai , I know. "
AW IT KINDA SEEMS LIKE KAI LIKES REITA MORE THAN RUKI EVEN THOUGH IT SAYS RUKIxKAI AT THE TOP!
Oh yeah, do you mind changing the color of the box that I'm typing in right now (Like...the comment box) I can hardly see what I'm typing. I bet LJers made my vision worse *shot*

bluevioletapple August 27 2009, 06:01:00 UTC

ORRLY ?

I also realised that it seemed more ReitaxKai than RukixKai but I know how to fix that now. Maybe. XD

AND

I would change the colour but I think I might not know how. I'm an idiot at html stuff. D:

It's not LJ that made your vision worse , honayye , it's the INTERNET ~ ! *adds sparkles and rainbows to the word 'internet' *

shihelena August 25 2009, 22:04:28 UTC

OMG you updated!
i squealed when i saw the update and my bunny looked at me really weird.(o.O)

awwww poor kai....you really like to pick on him alot in your fics, dont you.....NOT THAT IM COMPLAINING
loved the chapter, really

wow i think thats the longest comment ive ever posted (^O^)whoo!

bluevioletapple August 27 2009, 06:02:38 UTC

Haha ! Bunny ! XD

Lol , and I do like to pick on him alot ! He's my favourite character and bullying him is fun. 8DD

Heee. Thanks a lot for the comment ! And woot for the longest comment you ever posted. XD

truelove_speaks August 26 2009, 00:11:28 UTC

I thought I clicked a wrong link when I read the beginning and scrolled up just to make sure. Waah~ reading the first part made me think of when Kai first started out in the band and hardly smiled at all, until later of course. :) And Ruki. Stubborn, but believable. When it comes to sentimental things such a letters to my parents, I think I'm just as stubborn as him.

bluevioletapple August 27 2009, 06:08:40 UTC

Haha. Ruki would always be a stubborn brat. XD

Sentimental things are hard ~ I think I'd end up doing nothing either. We're all stubborn people. 8D

And thanks for the comment , bb ! <3

k435y August 28 2009, 05:07:52 UTC

Ah!~ *saves you* Don't do that. We need more. XD

Poor Kai. Reita is such a good friend. I want a Reita. XD And Ruki's also a good friend too. Why is it hard for him to write a letter to his parents though? O_o I feel like I missed something. And Aoi's concluding words to Ruki seem...strange since Ruki's new and all.

Anyway, please update soon. =)