Fiction

[bluetara2020]

I choke on rage, delight in wrath.  The crimson streaks of bright arterial blood dance on the edge of my vision.  I can taste the copper flowing sluggishly into my mouth and down my throat

Comments

[vikingprincess]

intense, creepy, and wonderful. now with a grain of added truth! :)

(this means I loved it)

[bluetara2020]

-laughs, bowing slightly-

yeah, apparently I do creepy really well. ditto with intense. now if I could do something with long fiction instead of these little bites...

[vikingprincess]

the only encouragement I can give as far as that goes is to keep practicing....