FIC: Come Undone (Snape/Lupin/Lily, NC-17)

[bluestocking79]

I have shocked myself by writing my very first PWP. Not only is it my first, it's sort of a threesome. I guess I don't do anything halfway, do I? *g* I wasn't certain that I had it in me, but it was actually sort of fun to write something so different.

I wrote it for Lupin_Snape's "Trading Places" fest, and the story was written to accompany osmalic's

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[lithiumdelusion]

*makes a sad face* I'd read it, but I'm not "Authorized to view this protected entry"

[bluestocking79]

Crap! I forgot that version was f-locked. I'll edit the entry to fix that. But here's a link to a non-locked version: Come Undone.

Thanks for letting me know. ~facepalm~

[lithiumdelusion]

...Wow...

Words fail me.

*pauses*

Kita says I'm blushing. She's reading it now.

Wow...

[bluestocking79]

~squeaks~

What, really? Seriously? I was really nervous about posting this one, because I've written anything like it before. Blushing?

~hugs you~

Thank you! And now I'm blushing, btw.

[duniazade]

Very good! It's funny and hot. I love this saucy version of the adolescent characters, it's so much more interesting than the canon one. I adore how they gently tricked her, and the clueless James ending. You should definitely write more pwp - maybe the first Saturday rendez-vous (btw, Lily's slight hesitation in choosing between possible meanings of "you're welcome" is perfect).

I read it on IJ, as I still have no access to the LJ entry - there's something not right with that one.

[bluestocking79]

Thank you! I was really nervous posting this one, but I did have fun giving them a more exciting time at Hogwarts than canon did. I suspect that the gentle trickery was Severus' idea; he wanted Lily to realize that she was attracted before springing the invitation on her. I don't know that she would have said 'yes' before, but now she knows what she'd be missing. As for clueless James... well, I couldn't resist. :-)

I'm so glad that you liked that moment of hesitation! That was one of those times when the characters were smarter than I was. I knew Severus should say 'You're welcome,' and then it occurred to me that he meant it in more ways than one. Now that I've jumped in and tried writing a PWP, I actually would consider writing that first Saturday evening meeting...

Alas, the LJ entry is locked for non-members of the lupin_snape comm, because of the rating. The rules aren't the same on IJ, so I didn't have to lock the version that I posted there. I'm glad that you could read that one, at least! Maybe I'll just post it on my

[duniazade]

Oh yes, you should definitely post it on your journal!

I'm looking forward to the first Saturday meeting too.

[bluestocking79]

I'll have to do that, then.

You know, I think the Severus, Lily and Remus are looking forward to that meeting as well!

[mundungus42]

You made a comment over at Shiv's that made me realize I hadn't read any of your Snupin. I'm so very very glad I thought to rectify that! What sublime hotness! What a delicious trap! *applauds enthusiatically* Brava!

[bluestocking79]

Wow, thank you! ~blushes~ This was the first actual PWP-style story I'd ever written, so I was outrageously nervous about posting it. I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

Shiv many not like him, but I do enjoy writing Remus with Severus sometimes. Severus needs all the love he can get!