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AU Challenge [Bluerising]

Jun 30, 2011 02:44

Title: Hellfire
Author: Clearheart
Theme: Angels/Demons
Rating: T
Summary: Haruno Sakura has the perfect life: straight A’s, a good job, and a stellar boyfriend. That is… until her guardian angel goes AWOL and gets booted out of heaven. Suddenly things aren’t so perfect anymore, and Sakura is not happy with the results. She must get her fallen angel to ( Read more... )

challenge, kakasaku

Comments 19

marybwolf July 3 2011, 18:51:31 UTC

Clear! Wonderful work! The dissatisfaction angel!Kakashi is feeling comes across with crystal clarity, as does his care for Sakura, even if neither of them realise it yet. Sakura's obliviousness is kind of funny.

*waits eagerly for part three*

bluerising July 10 2011, 13:58:32 UTC

Oops! Sorry for the lateeeee response. I must have been sucked into a time warp or something. This actually made me very happy when you posted a week ago. So thank you for that, Mary!

Oooooof. Oh yeah. Sakura is definitely oblivious and quite self-centered in this ficcie. She had to be in order for the whole guardian-angel, Kakashi-was-there-her-whole-life-but-she-didn't-know aspect to work. But now that she does know, the self-centered aspect is going to come through a lot more in the future.

Not sure when the next part will be up. But soon, hopefully! XD

cutecrazyice July 5 2011, 10:25:56 UTC

Clear, I really, really like this! It's very unique, and I like the idea that Kakashi is dissatisfied with his life. I really hope you can continue. :D

bluerising July 10 2011, 14:00:04 UTC

Thank you, Ice. <3 <3 <3

I would like to continue it too! So hopefully the next part will be up soon. XD

narutofan91 July 16 2011, 06:58:12 UTC

I can't wait for more. and i actually like the idea that now he's not protecting her from everything. though it was cute when he even protected her from burning her mouth lol.
but the idea and the writing are so good. there's humorous and serious notes and i love it.

bluerising July 18 2011, 05:10:19 UTC

Oh boy. Your comment makes me happy! =D

Thank you for reading, and I'm glad you're enjoying it so far. It's been a few weeks since this was first posted, but I would definitely like to get this story done. So if all goes well these next parts will be up and finished soon. *crosses fingers*