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blueraccoon

FIC: A Place To Be

Sep 12, 2006 00:12

Title: A Place To Be
Author: rebecca
Fandom: SGA/Firefly
Pairing: Ronon Dex/Simon Tam
Rating: NC-17
Summary: He doesn't think he knows how to be surprised anymore.
Notes: Okay. So ana_grrl wrote this lovely, lovely Firefly/SGA fic called Out of Place, which is gen, and which you really need to read in order for this to make sense. I read that, and then skripka ( Read more... )

sga fic, simon/ronon, firefly fic

Comments 39

ana_grrl September 12 2006, 12:44:06 UTC

OH MY! This is so great - I love how his memories of the crew are interspersed - the way they just pop up, triggered by small things, because that's really realistic. And it's fantastic that Simon both isn't sexually inexperienced, but that it's also a been a long time - it really works with the dynamics of the show.

Also? HOT.

I love what you did with this, and I'm all gleeful that it happened. Thanks!

blueraccoon September 12 2006, 22:20:34 UTC

*dances around in glee* I was so afraid you'd hate it. I did my best to make it fit in with yours, both thematically and--to an extent--stylistically, and I don't know how well I succeeded but I did try. What I was hoping for with the memories was to show that Simon was, in a strange way, making love to Serenity even as he was in bed with Ronon, because they were there as much as Ronon was.

I'm so, so glad it worked for you. There's always that risk you take when you write something based on someone else's work--what if they don't like it, you know? Whew!

*collapses in relief* yay!

ana_grrl September 13 2006, 17:55:22 UTC

I was so afraid you'd hate it

No! I don't hate it at all! It really works, I love how Simon continues to be wary around the Atlantis people, but how he feels like Ronon is perhaps closer to believable and straightforward. And yeah, I just adored the way you include Serenity and the crew in there. Thank you for writing this :D

strina September 12 2006, 14:09:44 UTC

AWESOME.

Loved the memories of the crew and the bit about Of all the people on Atlantis who might possibly say that, Ronon's the one he actually believes.

blueraccoon September 12 2006, 22:05:17 UTC

:D thank you so much! I really liked that line, because it's so true. He wouldn't necessarily believe it coming from anyone else, but Ronon? Oh yeah.

diluvian September 12 2006, 15:53:22 UTC

Wowee. Nice.

Of all the people on Atlantis who might possibly say that, Ronon's the one he actually believes.

Love!

blueraccoon September 12 2006, 22:05:46 UTC

Thank you :) I was happy with that line myself.

inalasahl September 12 2006, 17:12:10 UTC

Really nice job on this. The emotions are pornier than the sex.

blueraccoon September 12 2006, 22:06:20 UTC

Which is generally how it should be. Thanks hon! :)

burntcopper September 12 2006, 22:47:36 UTC

hot *and* comforting. How did you manage to do that? (helps that Ronon is basically a giant puppy/bodyguard/hot water bottle wrapped up in one, I'll admit)

blueraccoon September 12 2006, 22:50:31 UTC

*g* Two lost people looking for a connection, that's all I had...