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Foolish Love

Jun 19, 2009 22:02

Title: Foolish Love
Author: bluemonkiesx
Pairing: GRI~ Jiyong/Seungri
Genre: Angst.
Author's Note: request for ( Read more... )

p: jiyong/seungri, !oneshot

Comments 34

bluemonkiesx June 20 2009, 05:06:31 UTC

SPOT FOR haelin UNNI<3

haelin June 20 2009, 06:52:28 UTC

i am late right? sorry.. my radar isn't working now. got interrupted by my family affairs.. T_T anyways, i'm here now..

THIS IS JUST SAD..

bleeding ji.. i'm speechless.. i need to read again first.. will be back later..

bluemonkiesx June 21 2009, 00:33:49 UTC

aw, your not late. no worries.
*hugs*

haelin June 21 2009, 10:05:13 UTC

i still feel that i'm late.. coz i didn't get to spot myself.. T_T

bleeding ji! *tears up* thanks for writing this.. T_T

*gives you some munchkins*

Thread 16

smilli June 20 2009, 05:30:13 UTC

aww...poor jidee :( I'm kinda sad that riri is growing up now. There's all these stories about him outgrowing jidee. I know it was gonna happen at some point, but it still breaks my heart. The way you wrote it was really beautiful. It seems like it's just cause seungri's becoming a man (<-lol), but there's this subtle sadness and this underlying reason that seems just out of reach. akjgfalkhfli i'm bad at explaining stuff T^T maybe i'll figure out how to describe it once i read it again ♥

bluemonkiesx June 20 2009, 05:43:47 UTC

aw, I'm sad too! but in all honesty, I guess he does have to outgrow the "maknae" image eventually :(

aw, you're not bad at explaining! haha. That's what I was going for, subtle sadness and some reason that you can't quite grasp.

I'm glad you like it~
<3

cindyxmc June 20 2009, 06:34:38 UTC

SPOTTTTTTT

cindyxmc June 20 2009, 06:40:04 UTC

NNNNOOOO *cries*
........speechless

i love you<333
so beautifully written.

bluemonkiesx June 20 2009, 06:41:26 UTC

"nnnnoooo" what?
XD

I LOVE YOU TOO<3
*hides*
it wasn't beautiful. it was too angsty to be beautiful.

cindyxmc June 20 2009, 06:45:50 UTC

NOOO TO THE GRI DRIFTING APART!!
gahh, it hurts me sooooo much *cries a river*

it was angsty-beautifully written.
<333
and you know it! lols

Thread 5

wanielovesbb June 20 2009, 07:48:23 UTC

uwaaaaaaaaaa this is so sad...
why magnae whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy????
T_T

bluemonkiesx June 21 2009, 00:33:16 UTC

T-T
thats why I want to know!
akshda.

thanks for reading tho<3

veritas_vincit_ June 20 2009, 07:50:19 UTC

soooo, i can't sleep and decide to read some good fanfiction and i see you've updated and i squee! to myself a little because like i said, i wanted to read good fanfiction.

i click the link and i'm reading and i'm saying "no, no, no, NO MAKNAE HOLD HIS HAND!" "WHY CAN'T YOU PUT THE CUP TOGETHER?! SUPERGLUE, DUCT TAPE!" in my head and i only realize that i'm NOT saying it in my head when my *ahemgentlemenfriendahem* wakes up and asks me "what the hell i think i'm doing waking him up at three in the morning and oh my god are you reading fanfiction again?"

it's a compliment...i swear...it's in there.

methinks i'll re-read this again and maybe post an ACTUAL comment...

T_T yenikal June 20 2009, 08:15:49 UTC

poor g-dragon and Seungri...sniff...cute ending

bluemonkiesx June 21 2009, 00:31:59 UTC

HAHAH. I think I see the compliment?
XD

ohgeeze, I feel bad for your "gentlemenfriend". getting woken up at 3am because of my fic?! buwhahah, i'm horrible.

"oh my god are you reading fanfiction again?"
HAHAHHA, that happened to me one time. my friend called me super late, and I wasnt really talking to him, and he got mad and asked me "OMG. are you writing fanfiction crap again? DX" roflroflrofl.