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bluemagicrose

Reid and Natalie

Dec 14, 2010 23:12

“So what am I suppose to talk to an eleven year old about again ( Read more... )

tv: atwt, pairings: luke/reid, fiction, characters: natalie snyder, characters: reid oliver, characters: luke snyders

Comments 34

teranee December 15 2010, 04:50:37 UTC

This was so much fun!

I like that you made Natalie's feelings towards Noah quite complex - she loves him but she's upset by him too. The Natalie/Reid dynamic you've set up here is pretty awesome - I know an 11 year old who's exactly like this Natalie, so I'm impressed with your portrayal of her. Your Reid was also very...umm...Reid-y, yeah, that's the word. Very in character.

Hehe, and ganging up on Luke at the end was funny.

Ooo, and I love you for including cookie-monster!Reid - one of my very favourite Reid incarnations. :D

Looking forward to reading more of your stories. :)

bluemagicrose December 15 2010, 05:34:02 UTC

Thank you! Saying Natalie is like an 11 yo you know is the biggest compliment you could give me as I'm not around kids and teenagers at all and I was worried that she wouldn't come across as someone that age. 11 is probably older then what she was on the show, but I hated that they SORAS Faith and not Natalie, seeing as she's closer in age to Faith then Ethan. At least I always thought she was.

Thank you so much for reading!

ditzybea December 15 2010, 04:59:26 UTC

This was so cute!
I loved it!
It's a story like this that makes me miss the boys even more. I wish that we could have seen some scenes like these.
Can't wait to see what you write next.

bluemagicrose December 15 2010, 05:36:32 UTC

Thank you thank you thank you!

I miss them too.

joliepinkyswear December 15 2010, 05:19:14 UTC

This was very cute. I wish Reid had more time with Luke's family and of course Luke.

bluemagicrose December 15 2010, 05:37:11 UTC

Me too. Travesty that we didn't get more Reid/Snyder family moments.

Thank you so much!

sleeper6 December 15 2010, 06:32:44 UTC

Aww, Reid--making Natalie feel better about Noah is a hard job but of course he succeeds. I enjoyed this so much, especially because Natalie wants Luke to be happy and she knows that Reid makes him happy.

Luke sitting on Reid's lap and Natalie and the $50--very, very cute. Lovely!

bluemagicrose December 15 2010, 19:57:28 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

limeybird2 December 15 2010, 08:18:33 UTC

you did a great job. i love any Reid/Natalie or Reid/Ethan stories i can get.
glad you had him help Natalie come to terms with Noah & how he treated her when he left.

bluemagicrose December 15 2010, 20:04:01 UTC

Thank you! :) There's a lot of Reid/Ethan stuff so I wanted to take on the other kid.