Fic: Make It Better With You (Glee, Finn/Puck)

Jun 07, 2011 20:02

Title: Make It Better With You
Pairing: Finn/Puck
Rating: R
Word Count: ~9100
Disclaimer: The characters of Glee do not belong to me, etc etc.
Summary: Missing his best friend, Finn asks Puck out for the evening in the hopes of rekindling their friendship- and gets more than he bargained for.
A/N: Written for the wonderful fandom_gal who very generously ( Read more... )

help_nz, fic, glee, puck/finn

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myownghost June 7 2011, 19:03:14 UTC
Oh, this is wonderful! I love how much they still care about each other and am so happy that it ended with their friendship not only intact, but enhanced. Uh, so to say. Upgraded. Well, you know what I mean. They're lovely together. :)

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bluejbird June 10 2011, 10:46:15 UTC
Thanks! That was totally what I was going for- the, uh, upgrading of their friendship, so I'm glad that came across okay!

Thank you so much for reading, I'm so happy you enjoyed it!

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meanbutrue June 7 2011, 21:38:46 UTC
Wow, I have read all of your Glee fic and never commented, but I really had to on this one. I'm not ashamed to admit I've missed your Finn/Puck fics (and any combo with Sam) and was so excited to see this!

And then I read it and was even more excited! I loved how in-character they both were and how believable the progression was, and would love to see a sequel to this piece.

Me gusta! Yo quiero mas!

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bluejbird June 10 2011, 10:48:43 UTC
Thank you so much for reading the fic. I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Sorry I haven't posted much fic lately- real life forced me to pretend that it was much more important than thinking about Finn and Puck's epic bromance. :D

It's such a lovely compliment to say you thought they were in character. Thank you! And I'm glad the progression worked okay for you. Maybe one day I will be able to write a sequel from Puck's POV where he takes Finn out on his version of the perfect date.

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cranberryink June 7 2011, 23:46:26 UTC
Very nice! Sweet and hot, just how I like my boys.

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bluejbird June 10 2011, 10:49:35 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you.

Thanks so much for reading!

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backbitethnot June 8 2011, 13:30:48 UTC
Finn grinned hard enough that it made his cheeks hurt.

Oh, Finn. I'm grinning so hard my cheeks hurt. I don't generally read this pairing (but honestly, I don't see it that much), but every time I do I start to ship them even more. They're both just so ridiculous. And Finn is so confused about life and Puck just helps him out. And, also, a bff pact. Awesome.

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bluejbird June 10 2011, 10:50:38 UTC
I'm glad it made you smile! Thank you for reading, despite it not normally being your pairing of choice. I love how ridiculous these two are together in general. I'm glad you liked how the dynamic worked in the fic.

Thanks so much for reading!

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backbitethnot June 10 2011, 16:51:28 UTC
I forgot to mention these scenes:

“Hey, I made you this CD,” Finn said, pulling it out of his pocket and tossing it to Puck.

Finn...you're just so in love with Puck, I can't even take it.

He guessed it was some weird hand-licking kink Puck had, which he was happy to take part in if it made Puck happy, but he didn’t really understand what he was supposed to be doing.

I'm pretty sure I snorted when I read this. Your Finn is so wonderful.

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bluejbird June 11 2011, 09:28:57 UTC
The making of a mixtape is a damn obvious sign of love, I think- silly Finn for not realising earlier! :)

I'm glad the hand licking bit made you laugh! I'm convinced that that would be the basis of Finn and Puck's sex life- Finn being mystified by everything and wondering what odd kinks Puck might have (and Puck would just be all 'duh, my weird kink is you, dumbass') and going along with things and not realising what was going on.

Thank you so much for your lovely comments. ♥

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kidenagain June 8 2011, 14:42:54 UTC
*flails at you*

Everything about this? Quality. I'll be happy sighing all day.

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bluejbird June 10 2011, 10:51:19 UTC
♥ Thank you! I'm so very pleased you liked it! I appreciate you reading it!

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