Fic: Falling into Black

Sep 01, 2008 15:56

Title: Falling into Black
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Sam/Dean
Word Count: ~600
Summary: “Dean had technique like a thousand-bucks-an-hour call girl-probably learned it from one who gave it to him for free-and it was all technique and no heart, except for the hot, filthy words Sam was almost too far gone to hear.” Angsty, porny coda for “Red Sky at Morning ( Read more... )

vignette/drabble, post-ep, dean, sam pov, sam, slash

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glimmerella September 1 2008, 23:44:43 UTC
My left ovary just exploded.

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blueiris08 September 2 2008, 01:10:48 UTC
Um...I hope you didn't need it? ;-)

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jacey26 September 2 2008, 03:00:21 UTC
THis part was the best, made it all worthwhile,

"It was control without dominance, Dean’s response to Sam’s acts of independence."

Awesome fic.

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nghthwk8 September 3 2008, 23:43:33 UTC
Oh, I love that line and the rest: "reestablishing himself as the rock when Sam's world was shaken."

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blueiris08 September 4 2008, 11:36:59 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it.

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blueiris08 September 4 2008, 11:39:46 UTC
This comment is meant for jacey: it keeps posting below nghthwk's. Anyhoo, thanks for commenting. It's always helpful to get specific notes on the writing as well as the general plot.

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debarouchi September 2 2008, 05:19:22 UTC
Oh wow *fans self*

Awesome, thanks!

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blueiris08 September 4 2008, 11:40:08 UTC
Thank you!

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devon99 September 2 2008, 19:49:46 UTC
*rubs eyes*

You wrote slash?
Damn HOT slash as well.....fabulous stuff.

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blueiris08 September 4 2008, 11:40:49 UTC
Well, I've done slash before. This is the first egregious porn. ;-) Glad you liked it.

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danaid_luv September 3 2008, 02:24:49 UTC
*trying not to pant* It was full-on pr0ny, but Sam's internal angst kept it grounded. Really nicely done, thank you! *saving*

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blueiris08 September 4 2008, 11:41:32 UTC
PWP is fun, but I wanted to get a little more substance into this one. Thanks for commenting.

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