"Rites of Passage"

[blueiris08]

Title: “Rites of Passage

Comments

Re: nice little story

[blueiris08]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

[ulkis]

I really enjoyed this.

[blueiris08]

Thanks for commenting!

[morganslady]

Excellent stories. I enjoyed them both.Your writing style is easy to read. And I love John ,so keep writing him this way.

[blueiris08]

And I love John, so keep writing him this way.

It's apparently the only way he wants to be written, and you know John: it's his way or the highway. I'm glad you liked it.

[angelita26]

This was a really great piece. I love your writing style. Very easy to read and very true to character. I would love to see more of Dean's POV of this particular event though... perhaps he knew Sammy saw everything all along... just some food for thought ;)

[blueiris08]

I would love to see more of Dean's POV of this particular event though.

Thank you for commenting! Stories tend to write themselves and I don't feel a Dean POV coming on, but you never know. I'm glad you liked it.

[minx999]

Well written and very true to the characters, I think. The emotions were there as was the undercurrent of what that nomadic, dangerous hunter lifestyle brings into that family and how it slowly invaded each of their lives in different ways, molding them. Great job!

[blueiris08]

I'm glad you liked it. I'm not sure that John would really want/let Dean drop out of school, but he was obsessed enough that it seems possible. Thank you for commenting!