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J2 Fic. Count A Lonely Cadence - 1/?

Jan 23, 2010 15:32

Title: Count A Lonely Cadence - 1/?
Author: Blueeyedliz
Word count: 6,332 (this part)
Summary: Jared’s eighteen when he first starts hearing her. Jensen is an intern at a psychiatric hospital and Jared is the patient who turns his life upside down.
Pairings: Jared/Jensen.
Rating & Warnings: NC/17. Issues of mental illness, character death (not main ( Read more... )

look ma i wrote j2, count a lonely cadence

Comments 32

deanvica23 January 23 2010, 15:55:14 UTC

i wait te chapter 2 to read te fic. i would have prefered jared top.jensen have what age in the fic?
and at the end they remain together?

blueeyedliz January 26 2010, 20:18:21 UTC

No problem, hon. I'm sometimes reluctant to read WIPs too. Part two should be up in the next few days although I'm starting to think this fic might end up being three parts now.

Jensen is approx 22 in this fic. :D

macbyrne January 23 2010, 16:34:29 UTC

Oooh, schizophrenia!!! That hurts my heart, to know that Jared has that kind of disability. And I kinda want to shake Jensen, because really, neither one of them are in the right place for this, mentally or physically. They're jeopardizing everything! I can't wait to see what happens next!

blueeyedliz January 26 2010, 20:21:01 UTC

You're totally right.

It really intrigued me to think about what would happen if you met the love of your life in the wrong place and at the wrong time. Would you still risk everything? I guess that's the million dollar question.

Thanks so much for reading, it's awesome to have you along for the ride. There'll be more up very soon.

vicdesty January 23 2010, 16:36:06 UTC

WOW!! Okay, so I'm already hooked! I like your characters, especially your Jared. Will anxiously be awaiting updated. :DD

blueeyedliz January 26 2010, 20:22:27 UTC

Thanks so much! I'm really glad you're liking it.

There should be another chapter up in the next couple of days. This was going to be a 2-part story but at the moment, I'm thinking of extending it to 3 parts.

woman_of_ January 23 2010, 17:38:37 UTC

Oh Jensen, I hope you can help Jared, but you are in pretty deep already. Be careful.

blueeyedliz January 26 2010, 20:22:51 UTC

Thanks so much for reading & commenting - more soon. x

devon99 January 23 2010, 17:45:17 UTC

Goodness I enjoyed this. There is an inevibility throughout the fic, where you know that Jensen isnt going to be able to stop himself, and really he should, despite whatever Jared is feeling. Despite Jared being an adult and having freewill, he is vulnerable right now and Jensen needs to realise that.

Am greatly looking forward to the next part to see where you take it. At the very least I hope Jared can come to terms with his survivors guilt a little.

*hugs*

blueeyedliz January 26 2010, 20:24:16 UTC

*hugs* Thanks so much, always over the moon when you comment.

There'll be more very soon, although I'm pondering over whether or not to draw this out and make it a 3-part story. Gah, decisions decisions. LOL.