Walking Home A Crooked Mile - 2/2

[blueeyedliz]

Disclaimer, Summary and Warnings: As Part One. I still own nothing although after seeing the Red Bull soapbox vids and pictures, I wish I owned a pair of pretty, shiny Texas boys more than ever.

Comments

[starbright73]

Yes, I need more o this!

Gawd, this was good. Sammy just struggling underneath, trying to communicate and Asag was one SOB!

And this “Sometimes I don’t know who I am anymore, Dean.” Just hit me in the solar plexus. Because that must be exactly what Sam feels after all he's gone through.

And damned! I adore Bobby!

Thanks for writing this. *sits back and waits for more*

[blueeyedliz]

Thank you hun! I wrote the ending part early on and really liked it. I love the whole mystery surrounding Sam's darkside and his fears over losing his identity...I don't know what's going to happen in the show but Sam does seem to be veering down a dark and lonely path. And I guess being controlled by demons can happen in more ways than just possession.

btw: You know this already but I can't wait for your new SPN fic.

[magser]

Liz replying here cause this is where i read it.......obviously.......... duh *smacks self*
Loved it... great story!

[blueeyedliz]

Awww thanks! *Grins* I never know where to leave replies to stories I mean, I post on 4 different sites and it's crazy. I'm probably going to try and concentrate on LJ and CWESS. I love Fanfic.Net but LJ has much more possibilities with the extras you can add...art/music etc. I just need to sharpen up my LJ skills first.

[magser]

I am still fairly stooopid when it comes to lj,but believe me i much prefer it to other places lol,and the support and peoples talent is amazing here!Im looking forward to seeing more of you around here!

[gidgetgal9]

I loved this- to pieces. What a wonderful b-day present! I feel honored to be part of the dedication and with such another great writer. I hope Kokoda2007 had a wonderful b-day too! Would love to see more written for this!

Having said all this- this part is the part that really got me-
“Sometimes when she must have been bored alone at night in a motel room, no-one else around to torture, I guess...” Sam begins, eyes misting slightly. “She’d hold her breath. She’d lie down on the bed, not breathing and there wasn’t a damn thing I could do about it. I could feel my lungs burn but I couldn’t move my own body, couldn’t open my mouth and take a breath. She’d hold out until the room would go dim around the edges and then she’d breathe again. I want you to remember who’s in charge, Sammy. That’s what she said to me.”

I really think you should right a Sam possessed by Meg fiction after reading that! You sent chills down my spine when I read that!

Thanks again for the wonderful b-day gift! Gidget

[blueeyedliz]

\0/ Thanks - so glad you liked it. I was a little worried because I felt like I'd lost my way with the story somewhere in the middle

[gidgetgal9]

Oh wow, yeah love the Meg pov on the boys and running commentary in Sam's poor head. It reminds me a bit of when Lionel Luthor was in Clark's body- I loved that episode because we got Lionel's thoughts on Clark and his life. :0)

So once all you other projects calm down a bit- you should so do this!
:0)

[sendintheklowns]

I can't tell you how much I enjoyed this story I'm so glad Kokoda and Gidget had birthdays. I only wish they had some more this year :)

I adore your crazy Sam. Perhaps we'll see more of that in another story. *fingers crossed*

[blueeyedliz]

Oh I love crazy Sam so I certainly see him making a re-appearance.

I'm so pleased you liked the story!

[annj_g80]

You made my day. Twice already :-D (Thanks for your comment)

I love your crazy!Sam. The way you write just makes my mind go 'awwww' and my eyes all teary *gulp*. Awesome!

[blueeyedliz]

No problem at all, it's an awesome story and I shall be prodding some peeps in your direction with recs for them to read it.

Thanks for reading, there's a lot of crazy!Sam love going about this morning. Sam's a big strong guy but I love it when Dean is all protective of him.