While You Were Sleeping - 1/1

[blueeyedliz]

Summary:  Five sleeps with the Winchesters.  Teenchesters & Weechesters fic.  Some limp/angst the usual tasty stuff I always like adding.

Disclaimer:  I don't own the Winchesters or Supernatural but they sure as hell fire own me.

A/N:  Many thanks to TammiTam for taking a look at this for me.  Rated PG/13 for some swearing.  Also if the formatting is

Comments

[tahirire]

Oh! *flails* These are wonderful.

I love that they go backwards, and the last one you picked is just perfect. (bringing the angst by not mentioning it at all ... very sneaky *g*)

So many good lines, too -

Dean might be twenty-one but his dad is still his hero and Dad won’t let them loose Sammy. Not like this.

Dean's blind faith. *hugs Dean*

owing to Dad’s fierce determination to reach their destination before the next lunar cycle means the Redwood Falls Police Chief is sprouting fur and eating his colleagues instead of cream filled donuts.

LOL, awesome.

It’s Saturday morning and Dad isn’t usually home at the weekends but on the rare occasion that he is, he always seems to have a strange irrepressible urge to impose ‘family time’ on his sons

I love picturing domestic!John. There really isn't any reason to think he'd be bad at it, I mean, he raised 2 boys on his own, but it still seems like he'd totally do things like burn the pancakes. :-)

Wide pitiful eyes blink rapidly and, even at only five-years-old, he is well aware of

[blueeyedliz]

Awww thank you, it's fantastic to know that you enjoyed it and reading SN fanfic in the morning totally rules...fic reading at any time is all types of awesome in my book anyway. Liz x

[irismay42]

Aw that was lovely! Think I just need a Kleenex...hold on...okay now I can see what I'm typing...

That ending just killed me. Talk about John being lulled into a false sense of security!

Great stuff!

[blueeyedliz]

Yay! So happy you liked it. The reverse timeline was hard to write because it doesn't feel right when you read the fic...until you reach the end.

Thanks so much for reading. Liz x

[tammitam]

I'm not sure if I am doing this right ... LJ hates me too! But awesome story hun! I can't say it enough, great job.

YAY \o/

[blueeyedliz]

Yay! Tammi - you're here...on LJ! I'm so happy you're here. Don't worry, we can look like LJ dunces together lol.

[starbright73]

Must have missed this when you originally posted it.

Oh Dean, he just ripped my heart out in this one
And Sam's old enough to know that Winchesters don’t cry-it makes Daddy angry- but too young to understand why.

And yay for Dean, beating the crumpled sweater monster under Sammy's bed!

Beautiful!

[blueeyedliz]

*Grins* Oh no worries I'm so behind on my reading and my flist is gathering dust...I don't get as much internet quiet time as I'd like so I'm usually frantically reading fic or trying to write.

Glad you liked Dean in this - I really love protective Dean. Thanks for reading.

[ivybelle]

Oh, that was really good! Nicely structured and just loved the way you wrote Dean.

[blueeyedliz]

Thanks for taking the time to read, I'm very happy to know you liked it.