Retold and Renewed

[bluedragon3]

So, uh... when I threatened Peachi about returning to the Neopian Times, I... sort of meant it. I'm going to rewrite my old stories, one by one, to get back into the swing of writing. I'm returning to my very first (accepted) story, Shock Tactics. Let me show you how I've done:

Comments

[peachifruit]

AAAAA YOU'RE DOING IT

I-I MEAN the new version is quite nice but AAAAAAA YOU'RE ACTUALLY DOING IT

[anonymous]

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