[Fic: Hockey RPS] Drag me Through this Orchestrated Mess (Revision #1); Edler/Seidenberg; PG-13

[blueabsinthe]

You can all skim over this if you've read the original ( here). Fulfillment for Challenge #13b: Back to Basics at writerverse, which asked for:

For this part you will take the story you wrote in Part 1 and revise it down to be within 200-250 words. This means you may rework the story however necessary so long as you don't change the heart and soul of your

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[quenchmysoul]

That challenge sounds like it'd be fun, albeit a bit difficult at the same time.

[blueabsinthe]

Dear god, you have no idea how hard it was to get this down to 200-250 words, and still keep the 'heart' of the story!

*headdesk*