Comments | blueabsinthe: [Fic: Hockey RPS] Dreaming through the Noise; Daniel Sedin/Alex Edler; PG to NC-17

blueabsinthe

[Fic: Hockey RPS] Dreaming through the Noise; Daniel Sedin/Alex Edler; PG to NC-17

Nov 16, 2011 01:21

First off, met Sami Salo with cloverli, and got an autograph! *keysmash* Second, this is mostly for quenchmysoul because she was asking for Edler fic. And, last, no Chris/Max (sorry rokimova and pexylexy) this time around. Maybe in the next two days or so.

Disclaimer: Not real in any way, shape, or form. No harm or offense is intended.

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Comments 10

rokimova November 16 2011, 13:11:01 UTC

I love how you played with the idea of Alex's reality and fantasy, and dreams, daydreams all running together until the reader is unsure of what is fiction and what is not.

There's something piercing about unrequited and forbidden affections, how the one who wants cherishes and tends to these feelings like a wound. I'm so drawn to Danny/Edler, the relationship between them and what is not, and you handle them with such tenderness. I think my favorite was 3-- it is fascinating to see how Alex reacts in that moment, in the present, and Alex finally doesn't have to think, he just is, there with Danny. Ah, I would love to see you explore with them further, but that's with everything you write, so... ; )

blueabsinthe November 17 2011, 04:14:56 UTC

Thanks! I know how you feel about being drawn to Danny and Edler. I find myself coming back to them too.

The unrequited and the affection feeling off-limits stings, but it's so much fun to write about.

I really love that song in #3, and out of all of the drabbles, that one seemed to flow a lot easier than the other ones.

juliella November 17 2011, 04:38:50 UTC

these are all very lovely. ♥ and alex's pining is heartbreaking in a beautiful way.

blueabsinthe November 17 2011, 08:06:44 UTC

Thank you! Glad Alex's pining came through here :)

cloverli November 17 2011, 08:13:56 UTC

One of these days you're going to write Henrik/Edler. ONE OF THESE DAYS.

Edler, your position in this relationship is dangerously attractive. :|

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blueabsinthe November 22 2011, 03:13:40 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked these!

quenchmysoul November 24 2011, 03:04:02 UTC

jskngvrejfnbkvc Yeah, you've pretty much rendered me incoherent here. Their dynamic is just ... guh ... ♥___♥

I'm so sad I missed the Salo signing :(

blueabsinthe November 25 2011, 04:25:15 UTC

Thank you!

The Salo signing was so much fun! cloverli pretty much lost her shit there. Good times all around.