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blue_ten

The Return of...

Jan 27, 2010 01:18

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Comments 18

jesncin January 27 2010, 12:17:26 UTC

D8
It's YOU again! Haha, nice work on the page! I like the pattern on the blue cloth and the balcony of the restaurant! The light on the first panel is really rich and strong there, so pretty :D
I like Aislin already <3 and her classy choice in clothes!
Also, congrats on the fan art :B

blue_ten January 27 2010, 23:34:48 UTC

Thanks so much! :D

I think I'm starting to get the hang of adding textures now. It really helps to make the scenery seem less barren XD.

snapes_angel January 27 2010, 12:34:37 UTC

Win! And yea, there are bonuses and drawbacks to walks. (I had actually been there, once upon a time, except it wasn't constant, since I mostly had to walk to my high school, which meant close to two miles per day, cumulative, since it was just half a yard under the mile distance busing limit)

blue_ten January 27 2010, 23:40:32 UTC

Thanks XD. Haha, that's harsh. I only have to deal with the walk for another two months, which is another bright side.

snapes_angel January 28 2010, 06:47:40 UTC

This is true.

hakeber January 27 2010, 12:44:09 UTC

Any way to bicycle that distance, instead? That is a bit of a long walk...

blue_ten January 27 2010, 23:41:38 UTC

Hehe, I do have an old bike, but the chains are all rusty and I wouldn't trust it to make it the whole way XD.

hakeber January 27 2010, 23:54:49 UTC

Well...might be time to either get it fixed or get a different bike. Being able to bike it would cut your commute by more than half.

alexds1 January 27 2010, 14:56:23 UTC

Are you exaggerating about that walk?? T__T That seems like it would take most of your day to get to school and back, haha... is it possible to find a carpool or get a bike?

I found that second panel to be a bit non-intuitive, I had to go back and match up the key items (bird, pillows) to figure out what it was a window for. Maybe if you could include that blue cloth in there too it would be more immediately recognizable!

blue_ten January 28 2010, 00:10:33 UTC

Hehe, I checked it on Google Maps and the shortest route is about 15 miles XD. I have a bike but it's old/rusty and none of my classmates really live in the direction I go (small class). It feels weird asking people for rides anyway :B. It's not so bad though since I can take the bus to school, so I only have to walk one way.

Ah, I see what you mean. I'll pull the view out a little further on that panel to make the transition smoother. Thanks so much! :D

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blue_ten January 28 2010, 00:34:42 UTC

Definitely. I have an old bike, but it'll probably fall apart after the first five miles XD. I'll have to start saving up for a new one :].

Wow, that sounds really cool, a deceased character who plays a large part in the events :D. Aislin is a bit like that. She's sort of like a thread that sews together seemingly separate portions of the story from behind the scenes, only she's not dead :B.

Thanks so much :D.